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Alyarie In reply to Jchrispole [2014-08-15 04:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Those tend to be my personal preferences, what I choose to read or write, but I'm open to other genre, though those are my personal experiences. I currently read for 1 author. As I decided to return to school, reading an entire manuscript will obvious take more time than a chapter.
Let me know what kind of input you are looking for. 

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Jchrispole In reply to Alyarie [2014-08-16 01:41:42 +0000 UTC]

I would just like a comment on the structure, visuals, flow, and overall relationship to the rest of the story of each chapter. Now, you don't have to go paragraph by paragraph, but I would like to know your thoughts on what's going on in each particular chapter and what I might could do in future chapters since I'm still writing the story. The kind of input I definitely don't want it "nice chapter!" and nothing else. Critiques are valuable, and I'd like to find some use out of them.

I can be patient though; if it takes you some time to read through each  chapter. Is there anything you would like in return? 

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Alyarie In reply to Jchrispole [2014-08-16 17:42:32 +0000 UTC]

That works! You don't have to do anything in return. I never had anyone to read for me so I took me forever to get the courage to publish until a friend told me to try. I hope I can help others get the input I never had a chance to get before I published. I'm not a pro by any means, but I have dealt with a publisher and editor.

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Jchrispole In reply to Alyarie [2014-08-17 02:44:55 +0000 UTC]

Well then you're a step ahead of me. I haven't published anything yet; but I could later on. I've gotten critiques from plenty of people who weren't pros, or even that good with words; they just told me what they thought and I accepted their few notes. 

Anyway, we should get started, but of course there's no rush. Should I link you the first chapter?

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Alyarie In reply to Jchrispole [2014-08-17 23:40:02 +0000 UTC]

Check your notes. Unless you have them uploaded on your site already

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Alyarie In reply to elohcin111 [2014-07-29 08:18:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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x-bossie-boots-x In reply to x-bossie-boots-x [2014-02-27 10:36:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you also for the fav's

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