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Author's Note: Yeah, a serviceable climax! I remember when I originally wrote this I imagined a big sword fight to the center of the courtyard. But like then, I do want to write climaxes when I can that have tension and action, but not combat. Considering I mostly write military-adventure stories and I'd like to branch out, I want to avoid combat as the big climax as much as possible.

Anyway, as per the editing, it was mainly cleaning up some errors as well as correcting the narrative. For instance, in previous chapters, Truscott said he would climb first but when I wrote the original Hood climbed with him and even passed him. That's the issue with taking longer breaks between chapters and/or not paying attention. Remember to reread your work, Vox. 

Last chapter coming up! Just a tidbit for ya here!

- The Siege of Dgonae: During the Crusades, the ancient city of Dgonae was put to siege by a combined host led by Ser Truscott and Ser Boxberry. Finding a section unguarded, Truscott managed to get a scaling ladder on the wall and single-handedly became the first mouse on the enemy's ramparts. His actions led to the fall of the city after only a week-long siege. 


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