Comments: 92
Naoas [2012-03-17 09:57:58 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Right, I'm fairly novice when it comes to critique but here it's goes e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
For a start, I can tell you that the expressions and poses are excellent. Simba's face is particularly great, and you haven't fallen into the trap that so many do where it looks like the character aren't interacting- it actually looks as if Simba is looking at Nala, and Kiara is looking at all three of them. As well as this, the impact of the piece is great, it's memorable and eye catching- probably because the vivid characters are so contrasting with the sky. I also think the Sky is particularly well done, the colours blend really well.
Now the reason I've marked you down for originality, is that it's very similar to the ending of Simba's pride (e.g[link] )- and there is nothing wrong with referencing a screenshot. However, I can tell that it isn't a direct copy hence the excellent facial expressions, maybe next time you mix it up a little- even though I know you were trying to recreate the ending of Simba's pride- just to add some spice to it. Maybe change the angle, or maybe the positioning e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Now, you put in your description you used a tablet- I think the line would look more dynamic if you adding the tablet setting in which the line come out depending on the pressure you put on. This will make the lines a lot less blunt e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> The other thing I wanted to point out was the shading- its great in regards to a lighting source but I would change the opacity as some of the it (particularly on Nala) seems to be too intense and possibly a little uneven- I would duplicate the layer and add a gradient blur to it to try and give it a more even look. apart from that it's great, and good colouring.
Overall it's a really great piece (I do realise i'm reviewing old work, but It's so brilliant and I thought you'd appreciate this more that a comment e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> ) Honestly, it's fantastic- you have real talent e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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AnsticeWolf In reply to Naoas [2012-03-17 10:13:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for critique!
This art was first what i did with graphic tablet
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RaymondJRust [2019-07-07 04:42:35 +0000 UTC]
This is so beautiful and unique. Your color choices are absolutely stunning and the image itself is so thought provoking..................................gocash7.com ++
Don't copy "++ " with web address
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NikkiE-K [2015-07-04 06:25:51 +0000 UTC]
This looks JUST LIKE the real thing!!!!!!
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AnsticeWolf In reply to NikkiE-K [2015-07-04 09:54:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!!Glad you like!
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hollyann48 [2013-06-12 00:31:07 +0000 UTC]
The only critic I have is that Nala's head is slightly small in proportion to her neck, as the previous comment says. Otherwise spot on with the coloring, shading, everything. Absolutely love it.
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Velvet-art [2013-02-27 19:03:14 +0000 UTC]
Amazing!
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Agent36496 [2013-02-14 21:49:29 +0000 UTC]
Featured this piece here:
[link]
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SwanLullaby [2012-10-26 11:20:31 +0000 UTC]
You did a nice job on these four!
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stuff-I-do [2012-10-26 05:43:19 +0000 UTC]
ooh love this so much♥
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TrunksXV [2012-10-25 23:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Very Nice.
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Jasminerocks [2012-10-25 21:53:40 +0000 UTC]
AWW CUTE <3
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atram95 [2012-10-25 19:02:42 +0000 UTC]
Is Magnificent!! Congratulation I love it!!
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Nojjesz [2012-10-25 17:21:46 +0000 UTC]
very nice work! ^^
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wickedphoenix93 [2012-10-25 17:19:53 +0000 UTC]
beautiful work, the expressions and coloring are spot-on!
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masonday [2012-10-10 00:11:02 +0000 UTC]
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!!!!!
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Becky123190 [2012-08-11 14:50:12 +0000 UTC]
this is amazing but why does Simba look like he is wearing eyeliner in LKSP
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LovelyRangel [2012-04-11 04:35:44 +0000 UTC]
This is my favorite scene! You drew it beautifully, exactly like the movie!
Your amazing!
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LeoSandra85 [2012-02-15 16:43:35 +0000 UTC]
This artwork is beyound amazing. It is aboslute, love it.
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Xxfrankie [2011-09-21 17:23:08 +0000 UTC]
you can feel the love,pride,and power looking at simba and nala, love this pic
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cyntia2963 [2011-09-16 21:19:05 +0000 UTC]
nice done i love it
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mufasa45 [2011-08-31 01:10:44 +0000 UTC]
r u a boy or a girl
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NagaChelsi [2011-08-15 02:39:41 +0000 UTC]
nice work
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WildWolfHeart [2011-08-03 02:18:41 +0000 UTC]
You drew this!!! Wow that is so awesome! For a sec I thought it was a screenshot! Lol you are epic!
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HavickArt [2011-08-01 12:53:56 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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iPony [2011-06-04 18:37:08 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful. When I first saw it, I thought it was a screenshot from the movie!
Keep up the goodwork, you're brilliant!
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superstarbck [2011-06-02 21:19:56 +0000 UTC]
Those 33 hours of work paid off in my opinion, this is so cute, and so awesome, I love how Simba looks
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catgutzy [2011-05-25 01:52:41 +0000 UTC]
Damn Simba looks good for his age!
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AvaniFH [2011-04-13 13:43:20 +0000 UTC]
I Love It!
Its Amazing <33
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qwtze [2011-03-02 22:53:04 +0000 UTC]
LOOOVE IT! <3 -faves-
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