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artAlais — Commission: Yara and Zane by-nc-nd

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Published: 2015-05-18 06:00:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 908; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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Comments: 14

MurrayPlaysMC [2015-05-18 08:36:02 +0000 UTC]

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I really like that you didn't openly show that they were elves. Also i like the romance between them, it really shows how passionate they are. This is very well done and thought out well. I can clearly see you put so much time and effort but its so sad no one appreciates how good your art is. The only thing is its not that original I've seen it done before. It would of been better if you used more vibrant colors and if they were in better light. So basically the only thing that brings this artwork down is that it needs to be in a better light. I hope this helps you.

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artAlais In reply to MurrayPlaysMC [2015-05-24 09:02:56 +0000 UTC]

I rarely get critiques, so I thank you for giving the time to critique one of my works!

As for the lighting, do you have any samples with better lighting so I can study them and incorporate it to my future pieces? 

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MurrayPlaysMC In reply to artAlais [2015-05-25 09:43:28 +0000 UTC]

I'm just wondering, was the lighting so depressing to fit in with the vibe of it.

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Fayerin [2015-05-20 20:29:38 +0000 UTC]

OMG More of my babies! I alrwady told you how i love this
You amde them so well done. Love her expression also his coat sod etailed and those golden is so much like him!

Thank you! Hope to work with you agaiN!

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artAlais In reply to Fayerin [2015-05-25 05:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you too! You're wonderful to work with~ Just wanna let you know that Zane's a hottie

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Fayerin In reply to artAlais [2015-06-20 21:17:57 +0000 UTC]

Zane... i love him! thank you!

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Kinotsune [2015-05-18 16:03:46 +0000 UTC]

somehow this reminds me of soda. xD and i mean this really positiv.
like a high budget advertisement for berry soda. <2 omg i instantly want some. xD

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artAlais In reply to Kinotsune [2015-05-25 05:08:22 +0000 UTC]

Hahahaa! Must be the colour theme~ Glad I'm drinking OJ right now, or I'd crave for soda too now that you mentioned it. XDDD

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RaisloverSakura [2015-05-18 15:28:33 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful depiction of these two characters!
I love the passion and the tender touch they have!
Great work on the attire and her marking! I am sure Fayerin absolutely loves this!

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artAlais In reply to RaisloverSakura [2015-05-25 05:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I find tenderness pretty hard to depict, so I'm really glad it came through~

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Fayerin In reply to RaisloverSakura [2015-05-20 20:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Awwww ;D i'm so happy Rais! they look so lovely and how i imagined them

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TheTubich [2015-05-18 12:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Nice work

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artAlais In reply to TheTubich [2015-05-25 05:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank youu~

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TheTubich In reply to artAlais [2015-05-25 11:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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