pffft26 [2013-10-04 20:20:20 +0000 UTC]
There's a feeling of instability here, the upward movement of ascent contrasting against the angle of terrain; like the earth shifting, bits of earth flying out from under your feet. Some metaphor happening here? Also lots of tension, just what's over that rise. Well done.
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