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Billie-Bonce β€” Alya vs quicksand the 1st time

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Published: 2009-04-18 18:33:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 43231; Favourites: 190; Downloads: 3348
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Description This is the story of how Alya met the quicksand the first time. In May, just before their university exams, when the sun was already hot but the water was still cold, Alya and her two best friends were tanning on the beach. (By the way, if you haven't seen them before, meet Galya, the brunette, and Valya, the blond).

All of a sudden, Alya felt something wet under her. Before she realized what goes on, she sank butt-first into a little spot of quicksand. At the same time, her friends were able to walk safely around and to tease her. As Alya tried to get free, her arms got stuck in the sand, too, and the poor girl became completely helpless. Her friends could not stop making fun of her with jokes and tickling (Alya is ticklish!). However, when they finally tried to pull her out they realized that she is really stuck fast. The quicksand already turned into normal well-compacted wet sand. It took them two long hours to free her from the sand trap by digging the huge hole with bare hands.

How could that happen? As they discovered later, there was a water pipe under the sand. And the pipe gave leak just at the place where Alya sat. When owners of the nearby summer cottages turned on the pump to water their gardens, the water under pressure leaked from the pipe making very little but very hungry quicksand pit. And when they turned the pump off, the quicksand turned into normal sand, as it often does. Poor Alya just chose the wrong place to sit.

It was the very first time when her friends believed that Alya has very special ability to find problems.

This is a colored and slightly corrected version of the b/w picture . That picture went to the scraps section now.

I plan to do a mini-comic of this story. That's why there will be links to "previous page" and "next page". I would leave less of the grass on this picture but it is supposed to become a panel of a comic page and some talk bubbles will be there.

UPDATE: Well, as you can see, the above is the original description. I really try to make a comic, and soon we may get a chance to celebrate the 10th anniversary of the process. The comic is still 'under construction', and this picture is going to be a panel in one of the pages yet to be done. The first two pages are ready, and I hope you have seen them.


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Comments: 50

Empressness2015 [2017-06-28 11:48:45 +0000 UTC]

Even mother nature loves her so much she wants to swallow her right up.

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Billie-Bonce In reply to Empressness2015 [2017-06-28 15:34:29 +0000 UTC]

Not sure about the swallowing up, but at least it is going to hold her tight in its embrace

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Bladeninja76 [2017-04-25 16:30:48 +0000 UTC]

Hmm quicksand turning into not-quicksand. I suppose that would have to be necessary, good idea.

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Billie-Bonce In reply to Bladeninja76 [2017-04-25 19:26:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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wilnet1tractor [2015-03-02 03:03:24 +0000 UTC]

SAND SHARK SAND SHARK!!!!!

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Billie-Bonce In reply to wilnet1tractor [2015-03-02 21:35:22 +0000 UTC]

yum yum yum

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Kermitthefrog223456 [2015-02-06 16:01:37 +0000 UTC]

She got a free mud bath, didn't she?

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Billie-Bonce In reply to Kermitthefrog223456 [2015-02-06 16:45:43 +0000 UTC]

Yes, and also a session of ticklingΒ and breast massage. Her friends were pretty enthusiastic

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Kermitthefrog223456 In reply to Billie-Bonce [2015-02-06 16:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Are you sure she's unlucky?

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Billie-Bonce In reply to Kermitthefrog223456 [2015-02-06 18:43:28 +0000 UTC]

Not quite

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annasolesink [2014-11-11 17:48:29 +0000 UTC]

Are you still thinking of doing a continuation of this story? Or is this the final image of the comic?

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Billie-Bonce In reply to annasolesink [2014-11-11 18:44:17 +0000 UTC]

Now I am working on the second page of the comic. Two panels are ready in full color but without talk bubbles yet. The third panel is yet to be done.Β 

Currently I plan to make pages in such way that each of them is more or less finished joke. In such concept this image should become either the last panel of the third page or the last panel of the fourth page (it's hard to fit all my sketches in the third page, but it's so much of additional work if I decide to do one more page).

And well, no, this image should not be the last one. The trapped Alya would be tickled, massaged, and finally dug out. The last image would show Alya indifferently crawling in the cold water to wash the sand off.

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annasolesink In reply to Billie-Bonce [2014-11-11 19:19:15 +0000 UTC]

Oooh, sounds fun! Can't wait to see it.

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princesspeachanddais [2012-09-08 15:36:31 +0000 UTC]

me too link7770

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link7770 [2011-11-05 20:16:13 +0000 UTC]

man, wish that was me sinking in that instead >

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Billie-Bonce In reply to link7770 [2011-11-05 20:50:07 +0000 UTC]

ha-ha I prefer to see a cute girl there

But surely you may go there when she's out

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epic-valentino8 In reply to Billie-Bonce [2013-01-08 09:57:15 +0000 UTC]

the 2nd time?

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Billie-Bonce In reply to epic-valentino8 [2013-01-08 20:35:15 +0000 UTC]

If I hadn't omitted anything (because with her luck she could have more of this), it was that case . Was pretty scary for her, and it was really difficult to get her out, but everything ended happily. However, those guys refused to take her to a mountain hike next year, because "she brings troubles".

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epic-valentino8 In reply to Billie-Bonce [2013-01-09 21:53:10 +0000 UTC]

Ohhhh

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link7770 In reply to Billie-Bonce [2011-11-06 01:28:36 +0000 UTC]

I NEED MA FIRST SINK DANG IT!!!!

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2011-05-01 19:51:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, I remember this one from QSF and/or Deep Sinking.
The textures are still spectacular

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Billie-Bonce In reply to Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger [2011-05-04 17:46:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I think, the black-and-white picture with talk bubbles was shared at DeepSinking, and this coloured one - at QSF

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Zoe-the-Pink-Ranger In reply to Billie-Bonce [2011-05-04 21:32:03 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome

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quicksandfan22 [2011-02-20 07:08:51 +0000 UTC]

this pic is ace!


the sexy women or to rawh!

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Billie-Bonce In reply to quicksandfan22 [2011-02-20 09:52:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Levia-the-Dragon [2010-07-15 07:20:43 +0000 UTC]

That's just really bad luck for her there...

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Billie-Bonce In reply to Levia-the-Dragon [2010-07-15 08:59:24 +0000 UTC]

Unfortunately, bad luck is a thing which she faces on a regular basis. She somehow got used to it. However, this time was worse than usual.

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sigel4ever [2010-02-03 04:51:01 +0000 UTC]

nice

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Billie-Bonce In reply to sigel4ever [2010-02-03 12:14:58 +0000 UTC]

LOL, thanks! But I bet she would protest

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sigel4ever In reply to Billie-Bonce [2010-02-03 15:42:18 +0000 UTC]

indeed -_-U

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Superjustinbros [2009-12-27 16:36:56 +0000 UTC]

I like it.

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Billie-Bonce In reply to Superjustinbros [2009-12-27 16:54:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Superjustinbros In reply to Billie-Bonce [2009-12-27 17:26:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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ShadowyZman [2009-12-27 12:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Aww poor girl. I feel bad for her

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Billie-Bonce In reply to ShadowyZman [2009-12-27 16:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Yes, she's quite unlucky. She was rather scared sometimes, but she never was actually hurt. You may see more pictures of her: [link]

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ShadowyZman In reply to Billie-Bonce [2009-12-28 21:32:50 +0000 UTC]

Aww at least she doesn't hurt herself

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TBoneTony [2009-05-22 15:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Quicksand is always tricky. There is no way to tell where it is until you are sinking in it.

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Billie-Bonce In reply to TBoneTony [2009-05-22 19:13:33 +0000 UTC]

Yes, but somebody is lucky (or not?) to find it, others are not.

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Lady-of-Mud [2009-04-19 01:59:58 +0000 UTC]

I love the way you have it colored!! Very nice work!! ^_^

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Billie-Bonce In reply to Lady-of-Mud [2009-04-19 19:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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AdigunPolack [2009-04-18 22:29:18 +0000 UTC]

Billie-Bonce, I think you did quite a good job on this picture, and this is truly an improvement if you ask me, my man!!

The body tones and facial expressions of the three girls are very good, and I really like the way the solid sand mingles with the quicksand that the second girl was stuck in on the center-part of the picture as part of a cruel practical joke being played on her by the two other girls, and the grass on the top fits nicely too. As for your decision of removing the comic balloons from this picture, I think that is a wise move in my opinion, as we get to know more about what *really* goes on in this work, you know what I mean!?

All in all, this is a solid piece of work and a nicely-colored one as well, so well done for you and keep going!! !

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Billie-Bonce In reply to AdigunPolack [2009-04-19 18:46:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your kind words!

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AdigunPolack In reply to Billie-Bonce [2009-04-19 20:34:52 +0000 UTC]

No problem, Billie-Bonce, and thank you so much as well... again, it is such an excellent pleasure having you on dA, really!! !!

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AyaneMatrix [2009-04-18 21:32:03 +0000 UTC]

After reading your journal, I guess I could help by pointing out some problem areas that could be improved upon in future color jobs.

For the most part, the ground based shadows are very well done and match the girl's positions in regards to the light for the area. What's wrong though is that the shading for their bodies. If you're going for the cell shaded look, then a simple 2 or 3 stage color shift to the deep dark shadows would be fairly simple, but lack overall detail. On the other hand, using normal shadows would allow you to shade problem areas such as fingers and toes - which is currently lacking at the moment - and provide more realistic effects.

Another thing to consider when creating shadows on objects would be to use varying hues and saturation levels of the same base color for that object and use solid black for areas that are not getting any sort of light, such as a recessed area that goes into an object or a persons mouth. This effect usually works well for skin and hair, also for other objects that can absorb light, such as velvet; but sometimes not metallic objects.

Other than that, I think that you did an excellent job on the texture of the sand and in the way that it looks uneven and walked on in several areas. The towels appear to have the same sort of texture, which is either the look you were going for or you just colored over the sand. The grass... looks like grass! Not much to say on that, other than taking into consideration the light source, which may or may not be doable if the brush set is doing some of the work.

That's all I can think of for the moment and I thoroughly enjoy your work! Keep at it!

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Billie-Bonce In reply to AyaneMatrix [2009-04-19 19:31:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the fave, and thank you for your kind words! I especially appreciate your advices that are very helpful.

I explain a bit how I did the coloring. There were 5 main layers for color (plus 2 for contours). The girl's bodies were filled with one color each (one girl was supposed to be rather tanned, another one - rather white and close to getting sunburns). The shadows were made on the other layer which is the lowest one, actually it's black and white. All the layers above it are set to 'multiply' mode.

The lights are added on the separate layer above the color, but below the contours. The idea is that the girl's bodies are supposed to be oiled up. If I really do the series, the first picture would show the process of oiling. Without oil they shouldn't be that glistening.

The sand and the grass are two separate layers. The texture of the sand is the noise added after I finished making the 'footprints'. The uneven surface of sand is supposed to be seen through the towels. The towels have their own texture, simulated by the same noise filter as for the sand.

The 'quicksand pit' is drawn on the colors layer (above the sand). It was a great pleasure to obtain a good effect of flowing water just by smudging the sand's noise texture.

The problem with shadowing fingers and toes is caused by the relatively small size of the picture. It is posted in exactly that size that it was drawn (1600 px wide). Usually I use bigger picture sizes, then reduce them before posting. Here I was limited by the size of the original picture. Why I didn't scaled it up, I don't know. In fact, when I used the pen tool to make the contour, I did it at the magnification of 500%

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ZytherDark [2009-04-18 20:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice Colors

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Billie-Bonce In reply to ZytherDark [2009-04-18 21:03:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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acacin [2009-04-18 18:34:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks for posting this
you've really done a wonderful job

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Billie-Bonce In reply to acacin [2009-04-18 19:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I appreciate it very much!

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acacin In reply to Billie-Bonce [2009-04-18 19:10:44 +0000 UTC]

yw

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