DreamDayWirter [2013-06-14 19:59:25 +0000 UTC]
I really do enjoy this piece. It kind of hits that adult feel but still feels very younger adult/ teen in some places. Still a touching letter, with a lot of through and love but behind it. You can feel how this man is pouring himself into in hopes to lighten the pain he feels.
Your lay out kind of threw me off. I see the style you were going for but it kind of makes it feel choppy. Like Yves is sitting at her grave talking more then it's a letter.
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