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synyster-gates-A7X In reply to GBMelendez23k [2013-04-09 11:07:09 +0000 UTC]
For future reference, the point of a critique is to give constructive criticism on the actual ARTWORK (coloring techniques, proportions, creativity, etc) not to talk about a how much you love the band and give facts.
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synyster-gates-A7X In reply to GBMelendez23k [2013-04-09 11:44:54 +0000 UTC]
Then I'd ask you to please use critiques for their intended purpose to maintain the legitimacy of a critique for everyone else.
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synyster-gates-A7X In reply to GBMelendez23k [2013-04-09 19:03:07 +0000 UTC]
Yes, people usually don't critique unless they have skill in a certain area and can give advice on what you did well or can improve on. So due to that, most people view critiques as a source of advice that they can trust.
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ItachizWazTakenz [2012-07-18 10:50:56 +0000 UTC]
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I'm going to write a critique but I don't actually know how to really write one, this is my first time doing this. Okay. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/>
I'm going to give you a completely honest opinion, no offense intended.
Okay... I'm afraid to say this but Louis, Harry and Liam just almost resemble the people themselves, but good job on the faces though (they're incredible and they have the same expressions/features as them!!)!!
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Louis hair is a little weird, because it's like sticking out a little at the top there, but otherwise he's good!
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Harry's hair (in MY opinion, I don't know about anyone else) should be a little curly(er, if that is a word), and his legs seem a bit skinny.
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For Liam, it's only his hair that's a little weird, as it's not really spiky/straight because even when it's 'straight', you can see it's kinda soft/wavy-ish(?). Other than that, NICE!!
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No comment, because he's perfect. EVERYTHING. The eyes, the hair, that smile... AHHH!! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="LOL"/>
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His hair is a little 'up', so I suggest to tune it down a little. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="XD"/>
Watched 'The Adventerous Adventures of One Direction' yet? I think someone would make a comment like that. Other than that, Zayn's perfect. YAY! You even included a varsity jacket!!!
So that's all you'll be hearing from me (from this critique, of course I won't CUT ALL THE ROPES OF COMUNICATION WITH YOU) so I hope this was fair! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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flakkari [2012-07-17 12:24:01 +0000 UTC]
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This is really good. your style is very cute, and you did a great job of drawing 1D! <3
Louis, Zayn, Niall and Harry all look like themselves, but Liam doesn't look like himself really.
It's his hair I think- Liam's hair is too short and it's spiky, when Liam's hair isn't spiky.
Also, Liam's right arm looks too thick in comparison to his left.
(I'm sorry to keep saying things about Liam, everyone else is perfect but Liam e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> ) His left shoulder looks a little to sloping, if that makes sense. It looks as though it's sloping downwards.
It's really good, all in all though!
You have alot of talent, and I love the 1D works you do ;D
Your sister has good taste in music, I tell you that! Great job, keep it up. I look forward to seeing more from you, even if it isn't 1D. :3
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Teaganm [2017-10-29 11:49:16 +0000 UTC]
Louis Niall Harry Liam Zayn aka One Direction are best boy bands in world I Love them all are so dreamy and hotΒ Β
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Bramblethefox [2016-01-28 04:56:43 +0000 UTC]
Harry's my fave!! You drew them ALL perfectly!!
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Alvaroherrera [2014-03-11 21:15:57 +0000 UTC]
Liam se ve genial
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Louisse99 [2014-03-01 12:15:51 +0000 UTC]
Huh,I'm no directioner,but this is actually cute.
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SherbetSquirrels [2013-12-18 06:25:37 +0000 UTC]
I DONZ want to be critical, but isn't their heads too small compared to their bodies?!?Β Β Β
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headfullofstardust [2013-09-15 16:43:03 +0000 UTC]
I was seriously drinking a water bottle, andΒ when I saw this, water went everywhere. I did a spit take all over my monitor. This is just so perfect <3
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ErikaKiseki [2013-09-10 03:33:50 +0000 UTC]
cool
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biogirl23 [2013-07-11 21:54:17 +0000 UTC]
._. *is holding a ketchup bottle and squeezes it*
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FFairyy [2013-05-27 19:30:58 +0000 UTC]
Wow they're hot...well, anime characters are always hot... but you know, they are alive... o.O Good work, looks stunning! (: β₯
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emosasa [2013-04-20 18:31:18 +0000 UTC]
Wow awsome 1D
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luuhda [2013-03-09 01:32:53 +0000 UTC]
wow es realmente hermoso *-* me encanta como los dibujaste! β₯
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2Caesy8 [2013-02-18 22:34:17 +0000 UTC]
This is probably one of the most beautiful things ive ever seen *sniff*
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BittersweetHorizon [2013-02-04 18:54:24 +0000 UTC]
Tell you the truth drawing real guys in anime style is the toughest thing ever but you my friend have done a really good job
I LOVE IT!
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Lovi-McFright [2013-01-15 23:41:03 +0000 UTC]
Love it!~
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Im-Busy [2013-01-07 23:22:41 +0000 UTC]
Oh my SEXY <3
LOUISSS
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sozine2 [2013-01-07 08:42:12 +0000 UTC]
you just gaved me a seriously heart attack this THIS is just to damn beautiful!
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selenaandgelder [2012-12-30 02:24:17 +0000 UTC]
this picture is really cool
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