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WHAT I HAVE TO SAY

Excellent feedback on panel one... =O

This is awesome, thank you for being honest with what you see on page, the mistakes I made and so forth... wow it's great to hear what I've done wrong too! ^_____^ *hugs his friends and sibblings* Ack It seems that I'm making mistakes on every page from now on! XD XD XD Again thank you for being kind to point out my errors, it's the key to improvement ne?

Yay! Another full page of Tails! XD XD X3 So kawaii yet mature! XX3 Awww that look on his face on panel 2...

I tired a new shading style (linear-hatch-shading ^_~) on panel three for close up shots... I hope to do better next time. XD ^_~

I like the spatter effects (the piffy dots! XD) on the last panel... Ouch! X_X I wonder what happenned!? X_____X


STORY TIME

This page ressembles Tails long awaited promise to his parents... Ever since he realised what it's like to have a family at some stage of his life he decided that he would go and look for his parents... personally...

A trip alone, a journey to seek truth and truth beyond...

Are Tails' parents still alive? What is he going to do after he found them! O_O What would be his reaction be after all those years? What is he going to expect from them...?


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REPLIES

--- Actually to be honest I did some of your comments as offense! *SHOT SHOT SHOT*! XD XD XD
Heya Nuku Long time no see! I'm happy to hear whatever you have to say about my mangas, I appreciate your critics on 'Why Tikal and Maria is in there... *giggles* The end of the prologue chapter should kinda explain why they're there. ^_~

The only thing I'm not too happy about what you said is that ShadowXMaria is totally.. 'ugh!' I mean it didn't have to be that bad... I only had them as sibblings like you said, not you know... O_O XD I have a liking on the concept and relastionships between Shadow and Maria deeply and when you said it beastiality, GROSS and stuff like that it kinda pissed me off.. as if I said something wrong or presented something not what is meant to be... =/

You had the right to state that opinion but not so much that it stabs me in the heart that I enjoy a little bit of Shadow & Maria frienship/relatuionship idea...

And as for the feminine forms bits, look I know you're awesome and an expert in that department (what I mean is in terms of you drawing them when you incorporate in your furries! ^_^), I suck at it and I'm actually pleased with my results so far... ^_^

I'm pretty much happy with the way I draw Amy or other female characters.... I know I can improve but I don't want to go way too far with the female parts because it's just not my style ok? Please respect that.

All in all everything else sounds cool. ^_^ Thanks for stating your opinions and compliments Nuku! *hugs* ^_^ Ja~! ^_^



--- He sure it...



--- Okay-dookey! *gives the okay sign*



--- He sure does... ^_^ *hugs back hedgie-girl* ^_~


You love using that word don't ya? XD XD XD 'Juxtaposition'! XD ^____^ Cool Zac.. Detailed compliments as always... ^___^ My pleasure on the music, so you've experienced the awesomeness of Chrono Trigger ne? Indeed listening to music puts you to rest and it's good for the mind and soul... ^_~

Cheers Zac! ^_^ I'll catch you later sometime.



--- *nods head* ^_^

Thank you for your honesty buddy, and thank you furthermore for emphasising this vital point:

"And you had fun drawing and shading this page, didn't you? I believe that's what really matters so... keep having fun!"

Indeed enjoying what you draw, and what you do in life is important. I'll keep having fun Krusher... I will... ^_^

P.S. Your welcome. I fixed up that page... it seems what I wrote went missing... I don't have the address anymore to the first preference but still Chemb0t's is still an excellent resourece. Glad you checked it out and liked it. ^_~ Do give your compliments for his hard work ne? ^_^



--- Yeah I know what you mean... *is lisetning to the music in his head... ^_^* Eh? O_O Nani? O___O You played Chrono Trigger too! O_O X3 ^____^ Yay! XD ^_____^ That's cool.^_^ I haven't seen or played CC yet... XD

Well here some more tunes to let you remember by.

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Even the one you've mentioned on the post is here! XD The 600AD sounds so sad... meloncholy tune... *sniffles* Still remember when Chrono & Marle accidently travelled back in time on Lucca latest invention... Ah the memories... *sigh* ^_^

Oh anyway! XD ^_^ *hugs little bro* ^____^ Can't resist to do that! XD XD XD Thank you for asking about the dotted point thingy... it's my pleasure to tell you how cuz I only figured it out that day! XD Looks cool ne? You can use these to organise your written deviation more effectively and efficiently. Use it wisely little bro... ^_~

*Darky teaches Zephyr-kun*

Insert this on your posts ---> : bulletred : ---> put the ':' close to the b and d to bet ---> !

[Zephyr-kun has learnt the 'Bullet Red technique!]

*Zephyr-kun does Chrono's win pose - 'Yooosh!'*

Darky --- *giggles* ^_^ And here's how you perfect the 'Blue Bullet' techinuqe!

Same principle as bullet red but replace with blue! XD ---> : bulletblue : ---> put the ':' close to the b and d to bet ---> !

*SHING! BA -DUM!* XD XD XD ^_^

[Zephyr-kun has learnt the 'Bullet Blue technique!]

*Zephyr-kun does Chrono's win pose again - 'Yosh!'* ^_^

You keep up the good work bro, your personality and artworks rule too. Now go and master you new techniques! Use them wisely. *turns around and walks away like Magus...*

Wait a minute! *Darkytakes off cape!* I don't want to be Magus!!! XD XD XD *giggles* ^_^


--- *blushes* Eh..heh..heh.. Thanks. ^_^ Well I know you can drew aweome backgrounds, don't ever be jealous because you have the potential to make great pics.



--- Your welcome. ^____^ This hugging thing never stops ne? Let's set a new record and keep doing it on all my Tails Away submittions! *SHOT*! XD XD XD *giggles* ^_^ Ari~gato Kini-chan, it's really lovely to hear from you. ^_~

More of Tails coming up shortly little sis'... He's so kawaii and kookai! ^____^



--- Cheers monotoneemtion. ^_~



--- You know the moment I saw that expression... it also made me :tears of joy:

Thank you little bro... It's always awesome to hear what you have to say and what you think about each page in general... ^_^ Yay for TENSAI TAILS!!!! XD XD XD *salutes and winks at little bro Chemb0t*

Hey it's my pleasure notifying to the fans about your totally unique and cool tutorial! It took lots and lots of of effort and commitment that should not go unnoticed ne? *hugs* ^_^ Keep up the awesome work!!! Oh and... DO YOUR HOMEWORK! *SHOT SHOT SHOT*! XD XD XD *giggles* ^_~ Take your time with school okay?



--- Indeed it's messy! XD XD XD Yes that's a great word to express what you're saying! ^____^ I really really like how you described to me about drawing particular panels in detail once in a while... That advice had me in awe... Thank you... It's another new thing I've learnt from my frends and sibblings... ^__^ *bows in thanks like Ippo from the classic Victorious Boxers manga*

*clenches his fists*....

Slow down... So that people can appreciate the artist's detail... Wow I love it! ^____^ I'll remember that when I draw my fan-mangas and fan-comics in future! ^______^

Hmmm about the neck and glasses... Well I can't help it but I really like to draw in the neck in this manga series to portray their 'ageing' status compared to 10 years ago... (SA Style 'no neck' charaters! ^_~

I was actually with you on the glasses... but I decided not to.. as yet... *giggles* ^____^ It's an idea I support buddy but not yet to reveal... ^_^

*chuckles* ^_^ It doesn't really matter about the spelling, your English is fantastic with minimal errors. ^_~ Oh and as for the sibblings section... O_O How did I have Feng in there!!!! XD XD XD He was suppose to be among the 'others' section! X_______X Gomen ne! I made the change top get the message right! I hope he's not affected by this... Sorry again if this has affected any impressions made so far. -_-;;; X_X Still I don't mind if he's a big bro to me.. XD ^_^ *thumbs e up*

Oh! LMFAO! XD XD XD This hugging business... You don't need to if your don't want to buddy. ^_~ I totally respect that! XD I'm suprised about your courage to write it down! XD XD XD *chuckles @ "...*light, quick hug* ... *mutters* ..never were much of a hugger... -_-"* It's totally cool Espen-san. ^_^ I really appreciate that... ^_~



--- Weee! XD XD XD Aww gomenasai! X_X I didnt' mean to make you squint so much! X_X I hurt my eyes looking at the consfusing panel myself! XD XD ^____^

Wow! IT's a new record indeed! Da Da Da DA DA DA Dah Da DAAAAA! LMAO! XD XD XD

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X3 *Darky throws confetti on Taeshilh-chan! ^____^*

Thank you so much for taking into consideration about the 'details on a panel' concept... How Espen's talked about the paenl thingy and you agreed with it. ^____^ Thank you for this is a new thing I've learnt from you guys and I shall always remember it and incorporate it on future pages of my fanmangas/comics the best I can! ^____^ *hugs* ^_~

Tails is ever always adorable whether at young or mature age.. ^_^ Hope you like this page too! ^___^ X3

Wow I'm interested in how you told me about the way you draw expressions and how you learnt to do it! ^___^ Sugooi!!! Kokkai!!! X3 X3!!! ^_____^
*Darky writes down the procedures on how to draw expressions Taeshilh's way* *SHOT* *SHOT!* XD XD XD

*sigh* ^_^...

They're not sloppy at all and they're definelty something to envy about Taeshilh-chan...
Promise me to keep it up and be confient about the things you draw and do in life?

Ari~gato... ^_^

P.S. So I see how you got the 'pyo' sqeuking noise~! XD XD XD PYO!! ^________^ XD ^_^.....
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Comments: 23

AbbyandSonic [2010-05-24 17:48:03 +0000 UTC]

i love it

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MagnaSwift [2004-11-30 03:01:33 +0000 UTC]

yep its you, I could tell by your art, nifty

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MilesTailsPrower-007 [2003-12-21 07:47:29 +0000 UTC]

...Promises bring me hope, too...

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emotwo [2003-11-13 00:14:36 +0000 UTC]

*examines every inch of the page closely* ...hmph, I hate to break it too you, but this page is FLAWLESS! I can't find anything to point out. Well I hope ur happy, cuz now my day is ruined. LOL!

Considering that u used the sound-effect "crack" I'd say that was one hell of a hit, maybe even a fractured skull! Darky, u surprise me. What in the world do u suddenly have against Tails?? O.o

Yes I'd have to admit that panel 2 was beyond excellent. He just looks so... " Himself" that it's priceless. I'd advise u to take money for your comics hadn't it meant that 'I' would have to pay for it aswell...*sweatdrops*


Come to think of it, that he suddenly began to think about his parents like that was a little random, I mean without an event to trigger that line of thought (like seeing some1 else having a happy family-time), but I guess it's something which have been bothering him alot lately. Maybe u should put in a flash-back of when he first begun to think about it, but that's just my 5 cents. ..i think. I know the course of a dollar, but what is a cent compared to norwegian kroner?? ....
...Forget it. I just spun off track.

Ok, I realize that putting Feng in the big_bro-list was a smaller error on your part, but I'm still surpised over the fact that I'm STILLl on it... *shrugs* Not that I complain, i just didn't know i deserved the honor (or somethin').

Last thing: What's with this Ippo??? O_^

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jaggedice200 [2003-11-11 00:05:14 +0000 UTC]

nice work
keep up the good work

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zaceryspud02 [2003-11-09 18:37:49 +0000 UTC]

yep luv dat word ^__^ lol. Good word play with the names of the planets and this speach btw. Yeah I use that style ov shading alot. I use many styles thi so that isn't really a surprise is it ^_^. With that style you really have to think about the spacing of the lines aswell as the darkness and thickness of them to create depth. Another thing to note is the direction of lines causes the feel of different textures and the amount of curve to an object. Experiement and this well become obvious. You did well .

On tha first frame... is it just me or is his neck a lil too dark. I think the shadow would be a gradient to the right or lighter. Meh anyway I'm gonna get into listening to music more . Hopefully I'll seeya sooner rather then later.

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zaceryspud02 [2003-11-09 18:36:33 +0000 UTC]

yep luv dat word ^__^ lol. Good word play with the names of the planets and this speach btw. Yeah I use that style ov shading alot. I use many styles thi so that isn't really a surprise is it ^_^. With that style you really have to think about the spacing of the lines aswell as the darkness of them to create depth. Another thing to note is the direction of lines causes the feel of different textures and the amount of curve to an object. You did well tho .

On tha first frame... is it just me or is his neck a lil too dark. I think the shadow would be a gradient to the right or lighter. Meh anyway I'm gonna get into listening to music more . Hopefully I'll seeya sooner rather then later.

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Kinichan [2003-11-09 05:16:51 +0000 UTC]

^_^ Ya, I'll promise to hug ya~ *Huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugs big bro Darky tight* ^_~ OMG! What's gonna happen to Tails-chan bro? O.o I wanna know! ^_^;; Gosh, I haven't been here in a while, sorry if I'm late..... -_-;; heh. Well, I'm gonna go check out your other page m'kay? ^___^ Cya round, and of course, take care~

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sonicolas [2003-11-09 05:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh! I missed that detail on the fourth panel! ^^;

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sonicolas [2003-11-09 05:07:44 +0000 UTC]

o.o
I wonder on what that wrench fell on..
I'm thinking of 3 possibilies.. (the last one: it just fell on the floor but I'm almost sure it isn't that ) And.. well the result won't be good ^^;

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taeshilh [2003-11-09 02:59:03 +0000 UTC]

Aww! ;.;.. Poor Miles.. his expression on the third panel was so depressing-pyo! Even though it's obvious he would feel that way since he never got to really know his parents ;.;.. Aww..

And I'm actually wondering what just happened as well! xD Maybe someone up there accidently dropped the wrench.. and it hit poor Miles ;.;.. or maybe it just did it on its own O.O;; I dunno xD I'm puzzled right now-pyo! Better wait for the next page => *Sits all eager*

Don't apologize at all for my squinting xD No need to-pyo! It's just squinting => For.. like.. ten seconds xD No biggie!

And.. What did I do? O.O What new record? xD *Tilts head at the confetti falling and the "Victoreeeee" tune*

And you shouldn't write down tips on how to do 'my' expressions-pyo! xD *Waves arms, rapidly* They're no big deal and you're already wonderful enough with your expressions! ^.^ No need to change!

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hedgie-girl [2003-11-08 21:05:02 +0000 UTC]

Tails looks cute as always^^
He seems a bit tired though, I wonder what that sound was

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krusher [2003-11-08 18:31:57 +0000 UTC]

I think this page is great. Tails looks cool, especially on the second panel, and I think that panel three looks pretty good with that new shadow style that you tried.
The only tiny flaw that I see in this page is in the first panel. Tails' back looks somewhat deformed but probably it's due to the movement of getting up from the... uh... little box with wheels thing... I dunno its name ^_^;; Am I correct?

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kslrmine [2003-11-08 16:29:52 +0000 UTC]

I love tails so much now!!! Hes so cute!!! Yeah for tails!

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gsg [2003-11-08 16:24:27 +0000 UTC]

Ouch! That must be bad, if it makes him bleed!

Also, Panel 1 makes me wonder where those stairs go, hmm....

Like chem said, Panel 4 does look like a fishlens... it makes it look more dramatic. Great page, especially the hitting section at the bottom.

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luleiya [2003-11-08 12:47:57 +0000 UTC]

The dots.....I know. I know it's blood. I got used to this while reading so many mangas these past years. It's always blood.....and I don't like blood. It's bad. Blood on the surface always reminds me of....death. *shivers of the thought*

.....and I so do hope Tails will find his parents. It might hurt him a lot, after all those years spent without the warmth of a parents love....but he can overcome that. And become one happy family again.

That reminds me: Tails had a sister, hadn't he? When will she appear?

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chemb0t [2003-11-08 09:11:40 +0000 UTC]

Heheh. ouch! poor Tails! Looks like that wrench hit him hard.

Amazing perspective as always. Panel 4 is using a fish lens view right? Or am I seeing it differently again?
That close up looks great as well!

*takes more notes on bg, shading and storyline* hehehe ^^;

*has thoughts on when Tails meets his parents* Only time will tell ne? I'm sure you are going to convey it perfectly by then.

Again thanks for the tips bro! I need to salvage what little time I have left of this weekend for some practice ^_____^

See ya!

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zephyr-kun [2003-11-08 05:32:55 +0000 UTC]

*listening to the 600 A.D, tune*
^_^...Yeah..that song brings me good memories...
*remembers when Chrono and Lucca go to the chapel searching for Queen Leene and they find a new friend, a swordsman called Frog*

Tsc, I have to get that game again..It's so cool and it never makes me sick of it ^^ I guess I did finish that game over 13 times, each one with a different ending. If you haven't played that game yet, bro, you should try it, I am sure you will like it.

Thanks for teaching me the bullet technique, ^_^ I've been wanting that for ages!O_O Now I will infest my DA with bullets!! Fuuuu fu fu fu! *Darky uses a bullet on Zephyr's HEAD* Owww........

This comic page is very well done, big bro ^_^ Your talent and technique make your comics pieces of art, with huge quality in shadings, perspective and any other effects. *bows to the Comicmaster Elson * Another awesome and brilliant job you've done here. At least let me add it to my favourites, because it deserves much more than that ^_^ You take care and always remember of what I told you *points to your heart* You know what is it....

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sonictail [2003-11-08 05:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Man, we get to see tails more and I love what you have done with him, I hope you spend some more time building up the characterisation rather than the action.

awaits next part

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candlegirl [2003-11-08 04:34:49 +0000 UTC]

oo great job so far. in panel 2 it might just be me but it seems like Tails' back is a bit different ^^"" *this is coming from someone who sucks at anatomy* but all in all, I am loving this plus your backgrounds are very cool *makes me wanna learn how to do backgrounds more *

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bluefantasy [2003-11-08 04:11:44 +0000 UTC]

Awww now I feel like a big meany. I didn't see the prologue chapter. And the reason I thought you were making Shadow and Maria a couple... well you said Shadow x Maria fans would be happy at one point and you said something about a volleyball match between couples. =/ I didn't mean to be a big brat. -_-'

As for the female forms, I was just offering some friendly criticism, some advice on what you could work on. I didn't mean it as an insult. I need work on things too, I know that....

I'm sorry, I won't comment anymore.

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taeshilh In reply to bluefantasy [2003-11-09 03:20:11 +0000 UTC]

Aww! Now don't think that! <=\ *Pats you on the back* You just didn't read the prologue.. anyone coulda made that assumption before-pyo! Even I thought Dark-sama wanted Shadow and Maria to be a couple ^.^;; I usually never read descriptions.. but I do now to understand drawings and stories better => It was just a little mistake.. and now you know! Don't let that get you down-pyo ;.;..

And don't stop commenting ;.; Nobody hates you, if you think that. You just stated your opinion a little strongly. Anyone can do that! But that doesn't mean that it's the end of the world and that you're not wanted anymore. That's far from the truth! You're not hated at all and you were not a brat ;.; Please don't be upset!

.. And I know this isn't really any of my business xD I just hate seeing people upset and I tried my best to bring up the right words to atleast cheer you up a widdle ;.; Please don't be sad! It's not like Dark-sama persecuted you or something O.O He was even cheerful to you at the end of his comment ^.^ So you obviously know he isn't furious at you or something.

.. Okay. Speech ramble over xD I'm sorry. *Clobbered*

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bluefantasy In reply to taeshilh [2003-11-09 05:17:57 +0000 UTC]

awww thanks I know Darks was nice at the end but I don't like to make my friend's mad. =/

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