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PizzaPotatoNBacon [2013-02-16 07:55:31 +0000 UTC]
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Great job for your first critique! It's fantastic and very helpful. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
However, there are some things that could be improved. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
It's very easy to understand. It covers all important points, such as the message/concept and the actual photograph itself. However, while you listed the things one should note when making a critique, I honestly think it would be much more helpful, if you stated how to analyze these areas and critique them.
Sure, you've given an explanation on what those were, but you didn't add when they help a picture, or when they ruin one. For example: "Perspective - Is the photo taken at an interesting angle? How much depth does it add? Usually, aerial perspectives are good in... But they ruin pictures that..." This would help the reader get a better hold on the topic. (In Number 1, "Interpretation" is an example of what I am talking about as it gives the reader the real idea of interpreting the piece) I also suggest giving the readers questions to ask themselves when they do a photo critique, as this also will help them understand more.
In regards to the design and lay out of your tutorial, I think it's excellent that it blends with the site. I think it would be easier to read, if the text was a little darker than it is now. I see no problem in regards to spelling, though in number 4, the first sentence "What the artist did good" has a grammatical error. It's supposed to be "What areas did the artist do good in?".
I really love the great tips in the end- they're very useful and effective, and a great addition to the tutorial. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod"/>
Again, great job on this! You were a bit indefinite and vague, but overall this is a lovely tutorial to read. One I'd recommend.
I hope this helps! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
Have a nice day~ e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="25" height="20" alt="" title="Hi!"/>
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DianaGrigore In reply to PizzaPotatoNBacon [2013-02-17 13:19:26 +0000 UTC]
Hi, Alex!
First of all, thank you for the critique, it was very thoughtful and I loved your honest opinion.
I would like to mention, though, that this wasn't an article. Have I written it like an article, I would have mentioned a lot of things, and with many details of every line. There was a lot to say about each and every point that I stated in this deviation, but this should be regarded as some tips, some ideas from where to start the critique, some guidelines.
I am aware about the spelling, though, it didn't pop when I re-read it before submitting it. I will probably edit it when I have time.
I agree with the text being darker, I think that was a good point
Overall, thank you!
Diana
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alc26 [2019-05-11 20:57:58 +0000 UTC]
thsanks for the instruction/guidelines...so very organized... I need this thanks
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alc26 [2016-07-22 19:05:09 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the very instructive and well organized advice on "how to"
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DrewStaedtler [2014-07-16 01:50:23 +0000 UTC]
this will help a lot in my self criticism
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TTM77 [2013-02-17 14:26:04 +0000 UTC]
IMO the first step should be check to see if the original author want critiques. Many don't like a negative critique.
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DianaGrigore In reply to TTM77 [2013-02-24 22:14:54 +0000 UTC]
Well, I'm specifically talking about critiques here on dA. So for someone who has the critique option enabled for a certain deviation.
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TTM77 In reply to DianaGrigore [2013-02-24 22:24:17 +0000 UTC]
they only want to hear positive critiques.
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Starkiller-Unleashed [2012-11-24 17:15:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I've been having problems giving more helpful tips in critiques; only pointing out the positive. Someone pointed it out to me just recently, so stumbling upon this tutorial was great.
Your tutorial was very helpful. Thanks again!
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graviloquence [2012-09-06 15:39:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks SO much for taking the time to create this tutorial! <3
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HWAPhotography [2012-07-30 23:03:43 +0000 UTC]
on # 4. ...... It should say "What you think the artist did well." NOT: "What you think the artist did good."
Great idea, though.
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DianaGrigore In reply to BobCatD [2012-07-17 13:12:26 +0000 UTC]
I know what you're talking about the well educated critique and the emotions..I think that besides talking about the technical aspects, it's really, really good to express your feelings sincerely, that's how the artist gets the most of the feedback..
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Zedna7 [2012-07-01 17:52:22 +0000 UTC]
nice tutorial, thanks for sharing
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tonepainter [2012-07-01 03:25:31 +0000 UTC]
This is excellent, and sorely needed on dA!
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