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ElissandrAnne — Sonata For A Crisp Fall
Published: 2013-06-21 16:09:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1181; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 0
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One of my two entries into the Four Seasons Challenge atLevel 4 / Advanced
I would like to dedicate this one to for her birthday.
Kindly featured by www.deviantart.com#/journal/Wa…
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model*mizzd-stock mizzd-stock.deviantart.com/art…
forest (required stock)~UmbraDeNoapte umbradenoapte-stock.deviantart…
old mill~Talc-AlysStock talc-alysstock.deviantart.com/…
cottage~Pieceofmestock pieceofmestock.deviantart.com/…
path~needanewname needanewname.deviantart.com/ar…
birds*Frank-1956 frank-1956.deviantart.com/art/… frank-1956.deviantart.com/art/… frank-1956.deviantart.com/art/…
fox~LucieG-Stock lucieg-stock.deviantart.com/ar…
cats~lumibear lumibear.deviantart.com/art/So…
*EnchantedWhispers enchantedwhispers.deviantart.c…
textures=Sirius-sdz sirius-sdz.deviantart.com/art/…
*MagnifiqueN magnifiquen.deviantart.com/art…
leaves~the-night-bird the-night-bird.deviantart.com/…
Many thanks to all the stock providers! You guys rock!!
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Comments: 66
I'm glad you like it. And thank you again for your wonderful stock pictures!
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Feature ici ma chère : kurtzan.deviantart.com/journal... 
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Merci!! Je suis très touchée et honorée.
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Infiniment bienvenue ma chère. Content que cela te fasse plaisir !
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Très joli composition Anne, j'aime beaucoup!
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Merci, c'est très gentil! Je suis vraiment heureuse que cela te plaise.
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Congratulations! This deviation is an "Other Favorites" feature for our "The Four Seasons" contest. You can find it on the left hand side of our Home page in our mini-gallery.
I hope to see you participate in our current challenge!
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Aww... Thank you so much! I'm so honored!!
I hope I will be able to participate in the current challenge - I hope I can find the time to finish something.
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I love those watermills, and also the fall colours are very nicely captured.
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I love watermills too, and that picture is great.
I'm glad you like what I did - thank you for the compliment!
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La lumière est un élément important - et j'adore la lumière automnale.
Merci pour le compliment.
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You are most welcome!
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ah je suis contente tu as mis un renard, j'adore les renards, c'est très joli et champêtre cette composition
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Je trouve les renards très beaux - j'en ai parfois dans mon jardin, donc il y en a qui vivent tout près. Dommage que beaucoup soient porteurs de ce parasite si dangereux pour la santé... Je suis contente que cette composition te plaise! Merci pour ton commentaire.
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Quel parasite tu m'affoles là
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Cherche "échinococcose" sur internet... tu verras.
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je ne connaissais pas ! C'est épouvantable !
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Oui... C'est ça quand on a une soeur médecin - on connait tous les trucs épouvantables. Impossible de regarder les animaux comme avant.
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Hi!
I really like this, but there's are places that need more attention.
The fox almost looks like he's floating. Make the shadow under him a little darker. And since he's behind the model, he should be a little bit fuzzier, not as much detail showing, not as bright, and it should be blended more to the badkground. Right now, it's popping out as if it's the center of attention.
The tree that is near the model should be darker, and the tree near the fox should be darker, but less then the forward tree. That will help establish depth and space.
You only have a few leaves by the model, and none by the building or in the distance. More leaves in the entire image should be added. And the leaves should also be following the rules of atmospheric perspective.
Last, your road is the same tone from front to back. It should follow the rules of perspective a little bit more.
What I really love about this deviation is your composition. Making these few adjustments will make your entry even better.
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First off, thank you so much for taking the time to write that!
I tried every one of the adjustments that you suggested... and you can probably see the result! The whole composition does look better, in my opinion.
Again, thank you.
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It's a tough choice between the spring and autumn themed pictures as being your second entry, Love. I do think the winter one should be an entry.
Love the animals in this image, especially the wet little kitty near the bottom.
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The wet kitty had to be there... I don't know why, but he had to be a part of this composition.
It was hard to choose... I liked them all.
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I'm so glad you love it! Thank you!!
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You are always welcome dear
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Thank you so much! I do love fall colors too.
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yes! it's so beautiful!
you're welcome dear!
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Thank you so much, Karin. I'm glad you like it!
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You are most welcome
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Sublime scène ma chère ! J'adore la couleur avec ces tons sépia !
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De rien ma chère ! C'est grandement mérité !
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J'adore!! c'est magnifique, très beau travail
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Si j'avais vu ton commentaire avant de poster le mien sur ta page... cela me rend d'autant plus heureuse d'y avoir pensé.
Merci pour le compliment! Je suis ravie que cela te plaise.
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Merci beaucoup Anne, ça me touche beaucoup, je suis super contente de recevoir un aussi magnifique cadeau :hug
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Il n'y a pas de quoi.
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