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Bysthedragon [2014-11-23 04:06:38 +0000 UTC]
I noticed a slight contradiction, You said she was born to the Platinum tribe so I'll assume that's her mother's side of the family, and her father would be from the Phantom Tribe, and these two tribes are heated rivals, so that leads to Spectra being the result of rape, but if she destroyed the Platinum village, and her father's from the Phantom village, and Spectra hasn't been to the Phantom village...then how did here father die?
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Eternal-Energy In reply to Bysthedragon [2014-11-26 02:02:18 +0000 UTC]
That's a good point to make. Uh...I guess then he's out there somewhere.
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Bysthedragon In reply to Eternal-Energy [2014-11-26 04:23:55 +0000 UTC]
Probably, and I'm working on an idea with that. What if she didn't just destroy the Platinum Village, but lead the Phantom Tribe on the attack destroying the Platnium Tribe?
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Eternal-Energy In reply to Bysthedragon [2014-11-29 21:45:44 +0000 UTC]
That's a good idea. I'm going to edit her backstory here and add that to it.
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Bysthedragon In reply to Eternal-Energy [2014-11-29 22:40:04 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I was working on that cause I was re-making the story for The Guardians, cause I wasn't satisfied with the original version, so thing've gotten a tad darker, and now there are 15 Members of the team, still open for more to join.
They are the best of the worst; To Society they are Criminals, Murderers, Outlaws, Terrorists, but sometimes to fix what's wrong with the world, you have to start by burning it down!
-Boayin: Amnesiac Ancient King who's Kingdom and family were killed by a former friend, now trying to choose whether to remember his past and live with the pain, or move on and never know who he really is
-Spectra: You know what she did
-Siam: Raised and Trained to kill man kind, to avenge the genocide of his people
-Liana/Diana: Seeking vengeance for her mother and mentor
-Iraph: Brother Betrayed his Family, seeking Revenge
-Zippy & Zanny: Twin Hackers
-Vigilance: No Info
-Kaonashi "The Toll Man": Exile of his race, his appearance is followed by death
-Fred (no last name yet): Run away slave, now kills slave owners
-Georgia Niles: Run away child, now a trained mercenary
-Gregor Wattson "Deux Ex Machina" (that's the name of his mech): Mentor was assassinated by the Mob, now he's an inventor and weapons dealer, hunting down the hit-man and the ones who hired him.
-Annabelle/ Snow bell/ Snow Angel: Accidentally killed her parents when they tried to kill her for her magic ice powers, Now a specialized assassin.
-Huoyan: Father was murdered by his aunt, ran away from his foster clan, came back stronger, became alpha, united other clans, killed his aunt.
-The Knight: Run away child with extrasensory powers, now Huoyan's loyal Guardian
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Eternal-Energy In reply to Bysthedragon [2014-11-29 23:10:24 +0000 UTC]
Wait, why are they criminals? Aren't they supposed to help society?
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Bysthedragon In reply to Eternal-Energy [2014-11-29 23:57:12 +0000 UTC]
They're the rebel guardians of the people against a screwed up Dystopic society. There's Slavery, No freedom of speech, an Elitist hierarchy, Religious intolerance and radicalism, Genoism, and all form of magic has been made absolutely illegal, punishable by death or worst, and they hunt down all magical creatures.
As Example Siam and Liana are Therianthropes (People with the power to turn into animals) Siam's a jackal, and Liana's a Fennec Fox (plus she has the elemental powers of Flora and Earth, and when she turns into Diana her power of Flora becomes Ghost) If caught they'll be tortured, forced to take animal form, killed, and their skins, meat, and any other valuable body parts sold. That's why Siam's been trained by his grandfather in a legion of warriors to kill full humans, and avenge the genocide of his people. Liana's Mentor, Fissure, was a Great Tortoise and Elemental Master of Earth, he died protecting Liana from the Hunters, just as her mother died before.
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Eternal-Energy In reply to Bysthedragon [2014-11-30 01:15:13 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, that makes sense. So I'm guessing dragons are also hunted by this Dystopic society as well?
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Bysthedragon In reply to Eternal-Energy [2014-11-30 01:18:44 +0000 UTC]
Yes but they tend to live away from society in remote locations
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Bysthedragon [2013-08-30 19:22:14 +0000 UTC]
Oh also I just thought of an awesome nickname for her!
The Dragoness of Broken Light!
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Bysthedragon [2013-08-30 19:17:23 +0000 UTC]
Whoa she is a very interesting and well developed character, I defiantly like her, she could make for an interesting protagonist in the story but if you really want to keep her I won't stop you!
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Eternal-Energy In reply to Bysthedragon [2013-08-31 04:14:42 +0000 UTC]
I'll only keep her if she doesn't win the contest. Also, that's a really good nickname you have there! "The Dragoness of Broken Light"....it really suits her!
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Bysthedragon In reply to Eternal-Energy [2013-08-31 05:24:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks I'm glad you like the nickname, and you are probably gonna win anyway cause you were the only entrie.
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Eternal-Energy In reply to Bysthedragon [2013-09-01 04:51:38 +0000 UTC]
Really? I'm pretty sure I saw the comments of other people saying they woulkd join.
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Bysthedragon In reply to Eternal-Energy [2013-09-01 18:19:28 +0000 UTC]
One other person said they might but I haven't gotten any other entries.
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