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Published: 2013-10-17 19:20:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 309; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description

Team Name: Team Mystic

Date Joined: 10/17/13

Faction: Rescuers

Team Rank: Beginner

Rank Points: 105

Silver: 6020

Item (# slots): 4

Art Rank: Pokeball


Member One


Basic Stats

Name: Talia

Gender: Female

Age: 1 year

Species: Dragonair

Appearance:  Shiny, slim, snake-like, pink

Accessories: None


Pokémon Stats

Nature: Quiet

Characteristic: Quick Tempered

Ability: Shed Skin

Current Move Set:

Move #1 Wrap

Move #2 Dragon Rage

Move #3 Dragon Rush

Move #4 Aqua Tail


Extended Stats


Hobbies:

Hobby 1: Thinking of Sapphire
Hobby 2: I guess I'm the leader of this team...


Skills:

Skill 1: Finding food
Skill 2: Losing my own daughter it seems... 


Flaws:

Flaw 1: Gets scared off easily
Flaw 2: I couldn't accept Sapphire for who she was...


Goals: To help Pokemon who are hurt and injured (mentally or physically). Try and figure out this whole love thing. I'll also try and accept who Sapphire has become...


Personality: 
Gablade: "Ever since Sapphire left, Talia's been pretty quiet. She barely says anything because she's lost in thought so much..."


History: My family was taken from her, by a female Arcanine. I got a look at the Arcanine, and she looked at me, I quick slithered away before she could come after me. I had to leave them, I just had to. The last words my mom said to me were, "run, run far away, and do not look back." I slithered for my life, away from the Arcanine and the fire. A year passed without any word from my parents.


One day I found this little Vulpix egg alone in a forest. I looked for the mother for a week before taking it with me. When she hatched her sky blue eyes practically told me her name was to be Sapphire. Her eyes made her different from other Vulpix's. I knew right then Arceus had sent her to me to take care of her. I need to take care of her. She's my angel. When I heard of the factions, I knew I had to find them. Sapphire is pretty much oblivious to the troubles around her. I want to help others and teach Sapphire how to help others in case anything happens to me.

That little Vulpix... she's gone...

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Member two


Basic Stats

Name: Skull

Gender: Male

Age: 1 Year

Species: Houndour

Appearance: A dog-like body, with a white skull on his forehead, the skull is a little cracked at the top. He is mainly black, except his snout, and underbelly, they are orange. He has silver rings around his ankles, that are a part of him. He has two white rib bones going across his back, the one closer to his tail is cracked a little. He has a longer tail than other Houndour's, normal Houndour tails are about three inches long, his is about six inches long. His eyes are a deep gray, almost non-existent against his pupils.

Accessories: None

Item: Cantatio - Book of Spells: A spell book that only Normal, Fairy, Psychic, Dark, and Ghost types can use. Given by Ciqala from his library. Click here to see what “spells” it can cast . This item can be used only 15 times. Use wisely and reserve!

Pokemon Stats

Nature: Brave

Characteristic: Alert to sounds

Ability: Flash Fire

Current Move Set:

Move #1: Ember

Move #2: Smog

Move #3: Bite

Move #4: Howl


Extended Stats


Hobbies:

Hobby 1: I don't remember what I used to do

Skills:

Skill 1: Um, what's a skill?


Flaws:

Flaw 1: Okay, um... I'm so confused


Goals: I don't think I have any Goals at the moment, I can't remember much.


Personality: Um... You may want to ask that Dragonair or Ralts over there.


History: I had a history?


Writing Example

One day the curious Dratini was exploring Fogthorn Forest enjoying the scenery of the tall trees and crunching of the leaves under her scales. She looked up for a bit and felt a bump. "hmm?" She looked down and saw a tiny egg. The pattern on the egg was obviously a Vulpix egg. It seems to have been covered with some fallen leaves. That's a good idea including the color of the egg, thought Talia. "I should try and find the parents before any other pokemon finds it." The Dratini picked up the egg with her tail and awkwardly slithered around asking any 'mon she could find if they knew any Ninetales or Vulpix's. All the responses were "no" and the 'mon would just keep walking. After about a week of searching she gave up and said, "Oh well I guess you're coming with me." She went back to her home in Namboula Village. After asking more 'mons about the egg, the egg hatched into a beautiful Vulpix. The Vulpix opened her sky blue eyes and Talia instantly knew what her name should be. "Sapphire" she said. "Aaaah", said Sapphire with a yawn. She closed her blue eyes and took a nap. "I will keep you safe Sapphire."

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Comments: 16

JackJr12 [2013-12-15 06:31:26 +0000 UTC]

Update again! Well, Skull freaks me out. XD

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julioblah In reply to JackJr12 [2013-12-22 13:34:47 +0000 UTC]

Skull's goal.

Hahaha

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JackJr12 In reply to julioblah [2013-12-22 17:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Ermergersh it is skull's goal. O.o

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flygirlll26262 In reply to JackJr12 [2013-12-15 22:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Good

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JackJr12 In reply to flygirlll26262 [2013-12-16 12:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Lol good? Um... Oh god.

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DuskLugia [2013-11-14 20:18:13 +0000 UTC]

Interesting I have a Team Mystic too! (coincidences rule!) Although they're a eevee & turtwig team (but they'll get a dratini in the future). I do have another team called Shockflame that has a vulpix with an abnormal number of tails and blue eyes! (I never knew that was unusual for a vulpix, I just thought it looked pretty) Once the missions start up, our teams should work together some time

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flygirlll26262 In reply to DuskLugia [2013-11-15 13:49:01 +0000 UTC]

Yea, they should, that would be cool

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JackJr12 [2013-11-14 19:40:20 +0000 UTC]

Good work on the update!


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flygirlll26262 In reply to JackJr12 [2013-11-14 19:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, did you like that?

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JackJr12 In reply to flygirlll26262 [2013-11-14 19:54:33 +0000 UTC]

Of course I did!

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flygirlll26262 In reply to JackJr12 [2013-11-14 20:05:17 +0000 UTC]

Yay

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JackJr12 In reply to flygirlll26262 [2013-11-14 20:05:58 +0000 UTC]

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JackJr12 [2013-10-18 13:23:32 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed the app, although it was breif. Yes as gablade said, a bit more description in depth would be helpful, but it's not bad at all. It got the story down, and some basic history. Welcome to the group! I look forward to seeing more deviations from you in PMD-G!

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GabladeRunner [2013-10-17 21:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to the group fly! I will add a few quick notes, but only to help you become a better writer. Your writing form is a bit short, which is understandable, but you did forget to put in paragraphs when needed, and, this might just be me, but it felt you left out a bit of detail. For example, we can use Grudz's question asking format to interrogate this story. What design was on the egg that clarified it as a Vulpix. Any additional detail to the Vulpix or Dratini, since it is clear in their description that not only is the Dratini a shiny, but since the Vulpix is a newborn, it only has one white tail. Just questions to ask yourself to further clarify and make your story stand out. But, I am looking forward to your future stories in the group, and to see how you progress in your writing! 



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flygirlll26262 In reply to GabladeRunner [2013-10-18 12:24:32 +0000 UTC]

Ok i'll try to improve


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GabladeRunner In reply to flygirlll26262 [2013-10-18 12:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Just a bit of constructive criticism. We can talk in comm

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