Comments: 8
gucken [2010-10-08 20:31:29 +0000 UTC]
hey, this is pretty cool! I like the colours (again, you're pretty good at them ), the lighting effects + the big planet, good work on that!
what's bothering me a bit, though, are the starfield, which is a bit too crowded and uniform and the smaller planet.
Now don't get me wrong, I like the texture and the planet itself. However its position is a bit unlucky as the sense of depth is a bit confusing to me; right now I'm not quite sure if it's further away or if its closer to us than the big planet upfront.
overall, it's a very solid work, and quite amazing considering this is your first space art!
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fxEVo In reply to gucken [2010-10-09 00:06:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, look like I'm trying to do concept art, speedpainting, matte painting, space art at the same time, so GREEDY!!!
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Eugeneration [2010-10-08 02:06:37 +0000 UTC]
Incredible and really colorful! Nice story too!
I'm a person who likes to critique though, so: though the city layout on the moon looks beautiful - it kind of looks like it's only a single city (as if seeing it from an airplane, and not from space). If that's exactly what you wanted because the moon is super small, then I bow down to your greatness. But if you wanted it to look like a moon with a massive city surface (i.e. Coruscant), you might want to use a slightly different technique to draw the city. But it looks AMAZING - I'm just being nit-picky.
I'm hypocritical though. I always tell others to never criticize anything they can't do better themselves, but here I am, doing exactly what I tell others not to do...
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AVasquezArt [2010-10-07 12:45:51 +0000 UTC]
beautiful
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