NitaoART [2018-12-02 11:25:09 +0000 UTC]
Hi,
My 1st impression was like - holly sht, this is creepy. Bright colors along with thick contours and all these strips resembles madness. I am not sure what to focus on so my eyes naturally went towards the brightest spot of drawing - eyes. I guess anime eyes are totally not fitting here and maybe this makes it so good. I mean, even thought I am able to tell that they are from another story, I still accepted them as a part of the drawing. then I noticed black hands on a girls neck, knives in other girls eyes and vampire teeths of another one. This is really creative way to say something about our realations with others. And girl, then I realised how emaciated they are... One of them is missing a hand and the other one a head!
I love how you drew girl on the right. These red and blue spots on her neck and under collar bones are very creative. Also her waist is awesome. Sadly that super bright spot in right, down corner is close to it. It's my less fav part, it distracts with no reason. It's too bright. Also I am glad to see that you incomporated grid on the top left and in the girls belly it gives it some of needed areas of rest.
Overall I guess that you are going in right direction with this. Let it be spooky, let it be scarry, show sadness, madness, misery but in a very colorful way. Just try to keep similar brightness and buy a cheapest scanner for better quality. And you know what, it has great potential for a watercolor painting mixed with promarkers. Try it out. :3
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Kululu17 [2018-11-25 22:15:18 +0000 UTC]
Nice work. A unique piece, and the cubist look is well done. The color pieces in the lower right corner seem to really pop. Were they done with a different technique?
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