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Seattle-Fox [2016-11-23 23:34:34 +0000 UTC]
Great 4 chapter story, awesome job dude!
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dobergirl102 [2014-07-15 00:17:28 +0000 UTC]
Very cute ending. I liked your explanation for Sierra's cigar; I was wondering if you were going to cover that in the story, and I think what you have suits her very well. And Medina declaring Sierra the boss was a great moment.
I don't know if you're planning to write any more for these two, but I'm sure their adventures to come will be a lot of fun.
Hope you're well.
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dobergirl102 In reply to GDeNofa [2014-07-15 02:03:30 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I'm flattered. Keep up the awesome stories!
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Noratcat [2014-07-14 05:11:45 +0000 UTC]
Okay. This was a project well worth the wait. I haven't had much luck in writing, but it makes me feel good when characters I like are represented best in stories. And I think you captured both alternate universe versions of my gals very well. Their mannerisms reflect their fantasy world counterparts and I could see a similar situation happening, albeit different in plot.
I gotta say they must have been pretty hungry to have eaten all the cans. Am I right? I can imagine the restaurant owner's reactions I liked the candy cigar. Personally I would have just given her a regular cigar since Sierra's cigar smoking in the fantasy world is a common complaint of those around her. But the candy works.
One wonders how things will work out in the future? I still wonder and try to imagine how Sierra will meet the canine version of her love Kinto? That and moving in with him and bearing his pups. Though I could easily see her overindulging on the food her new humans provide for her. That doggy door is going to need enlarging heh. Medina I still need to think about.
Thank you for doing this. I hope this spurs you to write more of your universe and if you ever wanted to use these two girls again (like a cameo or something), feel free.
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