razrroth [2011-11-06 06:04:42 +0000 UTC]
Not many comments here...?
I definitely would like to be able to see the rest of the wall below. I feel like it's a bit incomplete and cut off because of how the picture was taken.
If the writing is actually cut off there, it still would've been nice to at least see that it was intentionally cut-off and show a little bit of the wall (or ground? not sure where the wall ends...) instead of making it look as though you couldn't capture the whole image with your camera, so you just shot what you could...
I also feel that showing more of the bottom would help to not only 'frame' the image more, but also bring the viewers eye back to the design. My eye just keeps traveling back up to that blindingly white sky and cracked wall, and I barely notice the writing. That is to say, I do love the writing, but I just feel it's not...the center of attention in this image. I just keep wondering about...Where is this wall, I wonder what's behind it, and why is it torn apart...?
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