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Kharanax [2009-06-17 21:39:12 +0000 UTC]

Not bad at all.

I like how you got the light reflecting off the irises and pupils. The texture on the ret cloth (bikini top, panties and garter) is also very nice.

As always, very good attention to detail.

A few things that could be improved, though.

The strand of gold chain that hangs from her waist should hang down straight rather that crooked (if she is immobile), or have a regular curve if she is turning (her feet seem to indicate a stationary pose, though).

The string in the flip-flops usually goes between the big toe and the toe next to it, it is the largest space between toes, the smaller toes are too tightly placed to allow a sturdy piece of material to pass between them comfortably on a regular basis.

The tail looks like it is some sort of velvet texture. I'm not sure if that is intentional, or if it was meant to look like fur, although the similar texture on the cat ears make me think it should look like fur. Of course, they could be costume cat-ears and tail, in which case velvet would make purrfect, I mean perfect sense!

The proportions seems a bit odd, but I am not familiar with what gaians are supposed to be like.

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