Comments: 11
KiriHearts [2019-08-14 07:13:32 +0000 UTC]
So sad. It made me sad. I like what you did here.
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WindySilver [2019-08-07 20:14:41 +0000 UTC]
You portayd the emotions so well, especially the sadness! Fantastic work!
Congrats on getting through FFM!
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GDeyke [2019-08-06 09:30:53 +0000 UTC]
This is really sweet.
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Irennia In reply to GDeyke [2019-08-06 21:41:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! ^^
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SCFrankles [2019-08-01 22:45:16 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on making it through to the end! ^____^
I really like the idea of the sentient reflection. Although in this world it literally exists, it feels like a metaphor as well. As you get older I suppose you kind of learn to be your own parent, and sometimes when you're in distress it does feel like part of you can step outside of it and take care of the rest of you.
Almost asking for two cookies, and noticing everywhere things that the mother would have liked also felt so truth to life after a bereavement. Very well done ^_^
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