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Izayoi7 — Gollums Valentine
Published: 2014-02-08 16:19:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 594; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Gollum wishes you a wonderful Valentine's Day!Mediums used:
Pencils: H, HB, 8B
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Comments: 13
this is nice its the good side of gollum u gave me a new found love for gollum i love it and happy valentines to you too and gollum thx
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THIS. IS. HILARIOUS. Just saying.
Can I give critique to?
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I'm glad you like it!
Sure you can
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It's about the text, when you add text to a picture it becomes a part of the composition, it is important to think about placing, and how doest it's shape and colour blend into the whole.
Here I think that it should be a bit smaller, I find it a bit awkward that it runs so close the the rim and to the figure. Also, the lines could be closer to each other, since this is one sentence, there is no need to separate them so much.
I'm not sure if it is a good choice to make every starting letter capital with this font... but the font is a good choice! It adds to the humour of the hole!
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Thanks a lot for the Valentine 
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Thank you and a nice day right back at you
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This drawing is great! You did really well on the shading, especially the highlights. I like the depth of his eyes.
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Thank you, I'm really glad you like it! 
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