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Description Basic info                                                                                                      For  Azol'Amath Carnival 
Horse name:  Bacalhau
Horse age: 736 yo
Rider name: Sasha
Rider age: 18
Stables:  Establos de Apollonia
Class: Halter


Demands                                                                                                      horse 5yo + 
rider 15yo + 
sunny weather 
big clouds on the horizon 
fullbody visible (horse and rider) 
costume 

Story                                                                                                              

For he was like an ancient myth, almost intangible and too astonishing to believe he was real. Like a phantom from another world, like an alien from below the sea with all its exotic colours... The only thing known for her was the lionfish colouring imprinted on him. Never before has she seen such a unique creature, for what is worth, she has only seen a little. Still pretty young but quite experienced, that is how we could describe Sasha, a positive minded student Jasper recently employed in her stables. Sasha didn’t have any previous experience with horses, her curriculum said, however, that she is capable of any kind of work and she would do the work with gusto and ardour. Not only did she fulfil the preset arrangement she and Jasper agreed on, she also kept trying to learn as much as she could about the stable animals, and horses most of all. She was hardworking but still full of humour and energy to entertain other stable staff. That’s mainly why they all fell in love with Sasha, an eighteen-year-old student of medicine. Jasper didn’t know exactly why she came to Establos de Apollonia to get some skills, but she knew for sure the girl had a big heart and was gifted with an enormous amount of “love for all”. With her positive attitude she also won the sympathy of Bacalhau, the only Nagian unicorn in the stables. Not many things were known about him since he preferred loneliness to company. What Jasper did know was that he loved corals and it was very difficult for her and the stuff to supply fresh corals for it only grew several miles from the island of Evenland and it was almost impossible to get some. She also knew Bacalhau can manage to get it by himself, that is why she just let him stay in the sea and by the shore almost whole day and never get the chance to build a stronger relationship. Now that Sasha was here, she became particularly interested in him, Bacalhau specifically. Jasper was sure it was because of his exclusivity and that he was one of the kind in their stables, moreover the only one who could walk on the water surface or dive deep under it and stay there for hours. And Sasha seemed to be also drawn by the sea, she enjoyed collecting seashells and finding pearls in them, unfortunately for her she had never found one.

At first, Bacalhau was wary of her, he probably thought she was acting weird and suspiciously. He saw Sasha jumping and dancing around a big tree trunk that was washed out onto the shore, or talking to seagulls, and another time he was confused by her swimming techniques he found extremely hilarious and that was the time he became interested in her too. For he was usually reserved and cautious, but also spontaneous. That is why one day he approached closer to examine her, to study her features up close. Sasha sensed him behind her back, but did nothing to disturb his surveillance. Jasper watched them from a hill above and was very proud, yet a tiny bit jealous, of Sasha whom she was training the previous days to be able to understand the horse’s soul, its needs and desires. Now she saw the training wasn’t for nothing. Sasha got the most of it and transformed it into reality, applied all the information about horses in this situation, on Bacalhau. And only then did he let her turn around and stroke his muzzle. His eyes shone and Sasha, and also Jasper, could see they were soul mates. Sasha was the girl he was waiting for for more than seven hundred years. That’s right! Bacalhau is so old he experienced the medieval times. That is one of the things Sasha admires about him the most. If only he could speak to her and talk about all the things that happened to him, she thought.

After some time, Jasper had a brilliant idea. She knew there was a Colderrian competition going on and knew she couldn’t manage to participate and the preferable breed were Nagians. Hence Sasha was the one to do the job since she was the one to build the strongest relationship with Bacalhau so far. “I was thinking,” started Jasper, “would you mind participating in a show with Bacalhau?” Sasha looked a bit shocked, but accepted with pleasure. “That’s great, Sasha, really great. Mostly because you are already registered and have number 1!” “So you knew I would say yes? What if I didn’t get along with Bacalhau?” “Then you would participate with another horse, I would have withdrawn his registration and put some other horse on its place. But since it is mainly a show for Nagians and it’s orientated on the most colourful horses, he is just perfect for it. So I’m glad you two get on well.” “Well I am happy to do it and look forward to it! But I hope I won’t disappoint you.” “That is not an option, Sasha. I trust you entirely. Furthermore, I believe this will suit you well as the competition is in Rio carnival style, which means not only the horses, but also the handlers need to have as many colourful accessories as possible!” “That sounds terrific, but don’t the Rio dancers wear only like... a tiny swimsuit?” “They do, but this isn’t your case, you will have normal-sized swimsuit, don’t worry about it. I also have some ideas in my head about the feathers we can use as a decor.” “Me too! I believe we can put the ideas together and it will surely became something amazing.” “Well, Sasha, I am very happy about your enthusiasm, let’s get to work now,” Jasper smiled.

Bacalhau didn’t need any extra training for he was on this world so long he had tried almost every kind of competition there is. He was like a lamb during the preparations, didn’t mind the very heavy  collar made of feathers Jasper and Sasha made. Everyone in the stables was excited about the show and they shared the collective enthusiasm. The final arrangements have been set, the starting number has been pinned, now the only thing remaining is the judge’s opinion.      

Ranking                                                                                                         

 5 points competition picture
 5 points full body
 4 points detailed shading
 3 points story (1050 words)
 2 points background
 0 points 6th place

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Comments: 63

Jasper-19 In reply to ??? [2016-10-24 18:49:19 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, thank you soooo much this really made my heart warm up a lot Im totally blushing now. I extremelly appreciate such a nice feedback thanks once again

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Forbidden-Hanyou In reply to Jasper-19 [2016-10-25 09:20:13 +0000 UTC]

I really do love it! <3 And I watched you because all your other art is awesome too! <3 Thanks for the watch too btw! <3

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Jasper-19 In reply to Forbidden-Hanyou [2016-10-25 17:27:09 +0000 UTC]

oow, thanks so much I appreciate you watching me  

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Forbidden-Hanyou In reply to Jasper-19 [2016-10-25 22:52:00 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! <3 Your art is awesome.

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GinasDream [2016-10-21 16:08:54 +0000 UTC]

First of all, I need your patience if you drew those feathers yourself. I mean, that must have costed you half a life at least.
Also super great job on her bikini, wow. I love that girl soch much. And the detail you put in here is amazing as well, the waves and shell in the background are what I like best about that.
And the horse shading is great as well. So shiny and it fits a sunny day at the beach a lot.
Just a little tip, due to the sand your characters should sink in a bit, just a little bit to make them more 'in' the picture.

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Jasper-19 In reply to GinasDream [2016-10-21 17:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for a lovely comment! I appreciate it very, very much, especially since you gave me some more feedback on what to improve! This is definitely what the picture misses, I can see that now Of course they should sink, I dont get it why I didnt draw it like that in the first place Well next time I will try not to forget about it. Really huge thanks for this comment

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GinasDream In reply to Jasper-19 [2016-10-21 20:18:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome  
Those are details you will see a few hours or days after actually finishing the piece. That's why I show it to someone before uploading. Works like a charm^^

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Jasper-19 In reply to GinasDream [2016-10-22 07:01:28 +0000 UTC]

really? I have never thought of that, good idea thanks gain

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Happy-Horse-Stable [2016-10-21 13:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Woaw, that's amazing! Love the details! The way you put so much dept in this piece, the ocean, the feathers, and ohmygosh the human. Well done, I applaud you!

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Jasper-19 In reply to Happy-Horse-Stable [2016-10-21 13:44:18 +0000 UTC]

my gosh, thank you for such a nice comment I greatly appreciate it and Im glad you like it so much  

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RoseRed-Deer [2016-10-21 01:12:05 +0000 UTC]

That horses design is super cool! I don't know how to explain it, but it looks remarkable! The background too, is super fitting

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Jasper-19 In reply to RoseRed-Deer [2016-10-21 07:49:27 +0000 UTC]

oh thank you very much! very nice of you. The design is according to lionfish coat colors  

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ArcticNomad [2016-10-20 10:07:35 +0000 UTC]

Amazing colors and details! They really fit for that background That shading/lighting is also great

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Jasper-19 In reply to ArcticNomad [2016-10-20 10:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for you feedback  

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ArcticNomad In reply to Jasper-19 [2016-10-20 12:03:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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AroonCat [2016-10-20 09:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Noah, i love the patterns on that horse!

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Jasper-19 In reply to AroonCat [2016-10-20 10:03:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot you should check the breed, they are based on the sea creatures coat colors
  , also 

world-of-colderra.deviantart.c…

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AroonCat In reply to Jasper-19 [2016-10-20 10:05:53 +0000 UTC]

woah, awesome!

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Talvace [2016-10-19 18:47:51 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely stunning! From the realistic style of the drawing to the unique and gorgeous design of your characters, I could stare at this for hours. Wonderful job on the water, by the way! I always struggle with that, but you draw it very well. (:

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Jasper-19 In reply to Talvace [2016-10-20 04:33:59 +0000 UTC]

I greatly appreciate your comment I hope you will succeed at drawing water one day (I dont like drawing it to tell the truth, but I did my best here).  

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AllspireEstates [2016-10-19 16:29:28 +0000 UTC]

The horse has such an interesting design!  I love those feathers with that background they're so pretty together ^^ I can't decide my favorite part it all looks so good! The ocean is beautifully done and the shading of it all goes wonderfully with the rest of the piece!

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Jasper-19 In reply to AllspireEstates [2016-10-19 16:44:21 +0000 UTC]

thank you for such kind words Its actually a lionfish coat color as the species of Nagian unicorns is based on sea creatures Maybe you should check them out  

haha I am most proud of those feathers, they are definitely the best of the whole picture. thanks once more for your opinion  

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KimEnLie [2016-10-19 10:39:37 +0000 UTC]

this piece is sooo amazing! the background is absolutelt stunning Q.Q also the horse and the person look amazing in the setting with their costumesm such lovely color combinations it truely looks tropical!

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Jasper-19 In reply to KimEnLie [2016-10-19 15:49:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you, the idea of the show was a Rio Carnival, so thats why the feathers  

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Magidaa [2016-09-14 15:47:32 +0000 UTC]

K tomuhle nemám co říct, Jaspi ty jsi bůh

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Jasper-19 In reply to Magidaa [2016-09-14 16:12:47 +0000 UTC]

    yaaaaay, mockrát děkuju Magii  

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BUGHS-22 [2016-09-11 15:56:57 +0000 UTC]

Nemám slov, fakt úžasné, detailíky v pozadí, moře, pírka, nádhera, krásně sladěné... O.O

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Jasper-19 In reply to BUGHS-22 [2016-09-12 06:20:54 +0000 UTC]

děkujíí moc!  

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Eris-France [2016-09-09 23:40:54 +0000 UTC]

this is so amazing!

I love all the detail you put into it!  

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Jasper-19 In reply to Eris-France [2016-09-10 06:57:12 +0000 UTC]

ooh thank you a lot  

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Flutties [2016-09-08 18:33:31 +0000 UTC]

Neskutočné! Úžasne si pokročila o naozaj veľký krok :3 Moc sa mi páčia

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Jasper-19 In reply to Flutties [2016-09-08 19:02:24 +0000 UTC]

aaahhh , moc díky, zase tak milý komentář, dneska z toho celá zářím! Děkuju

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Anniee-Art [2016-09-08 12:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Tak to toto je úžasné

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Jasper-19 In reply to Anniee-Art [2016-09-08 18:26:21 +0000 UTC]

vřelé díky Anniee  

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Irsibil [2016-09-08 05:26:05 +0000 UTC]

Než jsem to otevřela si říkám, wau, kdo to nakreslil? A pak koukám že Jaspi, úplně mi to vyrazilo dech! To je naprosto úžasné zlepšení, ta postava je naprosto skvělá a perfektně nadetailované ty pírka...  

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Jasper-19 In reply to Irsibil [2016-09-08 05:39:04 +0000 UTC]

       děkujíííí, obrovské díky, strašlivě si toho vážím, opravdu všechny vaše komentáře mi vhánějí další sílu a chuť kreslit něco úžasného! Jé, jsem strašně ráda, že se ti postava líbí, taky se mi líbí Konečně mi nekazí obrázek Jo a pírka.. tak ta mě bavila ze všeho nejvíc  

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Irsibil In reply to Jasper-19 [2016-09-08 05:40:33 +0000 UTC]

Taky si to zasloužíš, vždyť tohle už je posun na úplně jiný level!

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Jasper-19 In reply to Irsibil [2016-09-08 05:43:15 +0000 UTC]

myslíš?? Mě to příjde všechno pořád stejné, krom té postavy teda Tak děkuju!

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koki-no [2016-09-07 19:24:24 +0000 UTC]

Tak to se jdu teda zahrabat ! Šance vyhrát už je nemožná, áááá božínku nemůžu uvěřit, JAK jsi to dokázala nakreslit !  Prostě krásně jemné a nádherné Jaspi !   

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Jasper-19 In reply to koki-no [2016-09-08 05:37:06 +0000 UTC]

odkazuju na komenty Tily a buli a mé odpovědi xD přestaňte to říkat lidi, já ty colderrácké soutěže beru jako přátelské a to, že se to líbí vám, neznamená, že se to nutně bude líbit i Briss, která je soudce Třeba tam najde obrázek, který ji zaujme mnohem víc než ten můj (navíc bude určitě otrávená, že se na mě muselo tak dlouho čekat )

Ale moc mocmoc mocmcomcomoc děkuju Koki Opravdu krásné komentáře jste mi tady nechali, jste nejlepší!! Bez podpory kamarádů bych se asi těžko někam s kreslením dostala  

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TilaArt [2016-09-07 19:15:30 +0000 UTC]

Aww... Kašlu na to a jdu se spokojit s posledním místem nádhera jaspi...oba vypadají krásně, udivuje mě jak jsi udělala to moře a vlastně jak děláš ty krajinky :3 krása ^^

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Jasper-19 In reply to TilaArt [2016-09-08 05:34:55 +0000 UTC]

ale nééé, prosímtě to neříkej! Psala jsem už buli, že se taky bojím konkurence, to tak nemůžete brát, Tilo já taky jednou začínala Ale chtěla jsem, ať ty obrázky vypadají co nejlépe, tak jsem makala (mimochodem účast v soutěžích mi ve zlepšení opravdu pomohla, tak doporučuju vyhledávat i soutěže mimo colderru a účastnit se jich)  

A moc děkuju, opravdu mě všechny ty komentáře zahřály u srdce, úžasné  

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LysallArt [2016-09-07 19:08:15 +0000 UTC]

Úžasné :3 poslední dobou jsi se strašlivě zlepšila, hlavně v kreslení lidí :3 není tady ta jezdkyně nějaká tvoje nová postava? ještě jsem ji asi neviděla ale je hodně sympatická  

A co se týče toho nagiajan... pruhy, pruhy všudeee  neměla bych tu trpělivost, obdiv

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Jasper-19 In reply to LysallArt [2016-09-08 05:28:29 +0000 UTC]

joooo je, kreslila jsem a kreslila a najednou mi z vlasů vyplynuly tak trochu dredy tak jsem ji celou ztmavila na takovou světlejší černošku, a její zjevení ve stájích popisuju v příběhu Jmenuje se Sasha. Díky strašně moc! Dala jsem si u ní fakt záležet, protože jsem věděla, že bude skoro celá odhalená Nejvíc jsem pyšná na ten obličej, který mi většinou v malém rozlišení nejde dobře nakreslit a je celý akorát rozpitý. Jsem zvědavá, jestli jí někdy nakreslím nějakou refku.

Pruhyyyy ty byly asi nejmenší problém na něm, pokaždé zápasím s těmi ploutvemi totiž A taky s tím zbarvením, když to stínuju, tak ho přetmavím, tak to pak musím zesvětlovat a tím ztratí ten oranžový nádech, takže si pak ještě dlouho po dokreslení koně hraju s odstínem, jasem atd... Ale jsem strašně ráda za tak krásný komentář od tebe, moc děkuju   

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LysallArt In reply to Jasper-19 [2016-09-08 13:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Jop, příběh jsem četla, ale stejně jsem ji musela zmínit protože prostěěě... zbožňuju sledování nových postav u lidí  To máš pravdu s tím obličejem, zvládla jsi to na jedničku musíš! já se taky chystám nakreslit svým postavám nějakou pořádnou... chystám se už asi rok

Faakt? já bych řekla že ty ploutve jsou rozhodně lepší než pruhy není zač, ráda okomentuju a udělám radost  

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Jasper-19 In reply to LysallArt [2016-09-08 18:22:17 +0000 UTC]

tak to jsi šikovná, znělo to jakoby ne Fakt? To tě baví? Já se pak už ztrácím, teda hlavně v něčích koních, postavy ještě jdou. No ale ty máš alespoň jejich suprčupr portréty.. já ani to ne

Nooo nikdy nevím jak je mám stínovat jestli napříč nebo horizontálně, je to těžké Zatímco pruhy akorát hodím nějaký jiný mód a snížím viditelnost a tak se mi vystínují vlastně tak trochu samy ale chápu já si třeba nedávám pruhy pár koní co vlastní Briss, to kdybych nakreslila na refku, tak jsem šťastná, ale pak už bych ty zebroidní koně už nenakreslila nejspíš nikdy znovu  

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LysallArt In reply to Jasper-19 [2016-09-08 18:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Jojo, četla tvoje příběhy jsou super a navíc se teď snažím číst co nejvíc anglických příběhů protože se snažím přijít na to jak napsat kvalitní příběh v aj Jop, baví, mě to připadá strašně zajímavý všechny ty storyline co se pak můžou potencionálně setkat a ty charaktery... prostě mě to baví ani nevím proč

To ti věřím to je dobrý v tom případě, já jsem moc líná cokoliv kolorovat nebo tak, takže kreslím většinou na tři vrstvy - krajina, kůň, detaily jop, Brissí má taky super hardcore designy

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Jasper-19 In reply to LysallArt [2016-09-09 06:35:21 +0000 UTC]

no musím říct, že jsem si toho všimla u příběhu tvého, mělas tam zničehonic uplně super výrazy a obraty, bohužel místy to kazí ta gramatika, ale tento příběh na carneval je určitě tvůj nejlepší zatím s tím usnutím mi to připomnělo mě a Leen na jedné soutěži Je to zajímavé, no pak se ale musí lidi dohodnout (nebo vlastně ani ne) a zahrnout tam další postavy od ostatních, ať je to fakt trochu jako roleplay a další na to může navázat, to bychom podle mě měli dělat častěji

měla jsem taky období, kdy mi stačilo 5 vrstev a dobré, ale tady u tohoto třeba jsem jich měla fakt hodně. je to pohodlnější pak něco smazat fakt že jo. 

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LysallArt In reply to Jasper-19 [2016-09-09 11:52:48 +0000 UTC]

Gramatika mi to rozhodně kazí, i když se s tím snažím něco dělat no díky :3 faakt? to si asi ani nepamatuju, zkusím to pohledat a přečíst si to to je pravda, no bylo by to občas dobrý, já jsem to někdy dělala a někdy ne, je to jak kdy  

Já to mám třeba naopak, dřív jsem měla období stovky vrstev a teď mě to nepředstavitelně rozčiluje když tam mezi nima nemám přehled a ten já strácím někde u sedmi, takže tak

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Jasper-19 In reply to LysallArt [2016-09-09 12:39:51 +0000 UTC]

jo, u té poslední soutěže s tou mlhou mám dojem. 

No tam je pak hlavní si ty vrstvy třeba dobře pojmenovat nebo i dávat do těch skupin, to se v tom pak vyznat ještě i dá. Ale já taky preferuju menší počet, jakmile mám třeba tři vrstvy a vím, že na nich už nic dělat nebudu, tak si je sloučím Ať toho mám taky co nejmíň

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