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esadista [2023-11-08 09:09:38 +0000 UTC]
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yourbdtop2 [2022-11-07 17:33:14 +0000 UTC]
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p1nes0l [2021-05-12 02:38:49 +0000 UTC]
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mrhungry56 [2020-01-16 02:04:48 +0000 UTC]
Terrific story. I can certainly see how the girl would become obsessed with watching the girl in the cell, and then imagining what it would be like to be in that same situation. In the end, she made her own situation quite extreme, and she may regret that, but it will be too late for regrets.
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barefootliam [2019-12-07 01:20:45 +0000 UTC]
This edgy, fuzzy, unclear boundary between slavery and suicide, between imprisonment and death, it’s such a strong pull.
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KurvyKate [2019-12-04 18:43:32 +0000 UTC]
As a writer you aren't going to want to hear this but when these groups come up in my new deviations with another 20 stories to read I feel as guilty as hell for thinking I just don't have time and deleting the whole lot. Sometimes I pick one or two, then scroll down to the end to see how long it is before I bother to read it and if I do, I usually wish I hadn't. I'm sorry. I'm sure mine get deleted like that too, it's just how it is.
However, there's something sexy, sinister and as scary as hell in pouring out your kinky heart on line isn't there. We have no idea who these people are do we? I started reading this because of the title and wondered if it might be about that. It reminded me of "Hostel", the film, I'm sure you've seen that.
I finished reading it because it made my skin tingle. Sometimes fear and sex are the same thing. How hard is it to push the padlock shut when you don't have the key?
Kate XX
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steveXL5zodiac [2019-12-03 13:27:24 +0000 UTC]
O......M...…..G...…..!!!!!!!!!!
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KurvyKate In reply to kastenbrotstueck [2019-12-04 18:50:14 +0000 UTC]
No you wouldn't you nutters! The only thing that lacks credibility in this is "but also lust and the greed for more." She's going to be scared witless by then because her beautiful fantasy's become real. No one hides a fantasy so deep and dark, making it real wouldn't kill it.
This story is a horror masterpiece because by the end we know she's made a terrible mistake.
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KurvyKate In reply to kastenbrotstueck [2019-12-04 20:28:26 +0000 UTC]
I meant that yes we all know everything posted on here is pure fantasy, of course it is, but..........
Just say you invented a character who thought she could try to make it real? Given that we alll know that's stupid we're all terrified it's going go tits up for your heroine. That's why we're interested in the story.
You turned kinky sex into a horror story but still made it sexy because the horror is the kink part of kinky sex in the first place.
"Masterpiece" because when we read the list of things she thinks she wants to be threatened by, we know they're only fun as a threat, as a fantasy. But she's going to get them, for real. I thought "Oh god no!" It's supposed to scare me right? And you did!
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KaiserOfPrussia [2019-12-01 21:50:15 +0000 UTC]
Very very interesting story, I like the premise, and it so very well executed.
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KaiserOfPrussia In reply to kastenbrotstueck [2019-12-01 22:07:07 +0000 UTC]
But also one thing, is this based off a true story, because i will totally sign up for it!
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DjEtla [2019-12-01 21:36:26 +0000 UTC]
It's a good story. Well done. I like the theme of permanent bondage that's voluntary and consensual. (At least it's voluntary & consensual at the start.)
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DjEtla In reply to kastenbrotstueck [2019-12-01 22:04:31 +0000 UTC]
Yes "consensual, voluntary and permanent" is pretty much my favorite scenario too. I'll have to look at other stories and art in your gallery soon.
I've tried to write and post several stories here with the "consensual, voluntary and permanent" theme, like this short, little tale:
Text version:
NEW GIRL FOR THE MILKING BARN
Illustrated version:
AGfarm040raw - caption 4
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