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BATTLEFAIRIES [2018-01-06 21:57:06 +0000 UTC]

Hello there! You have been visited by a Critique Ninja! We stealthily roam the site, looking to leave thoughtful and useful criticism, as per the spirit of CRITmas . Mind if I just hop on to business, then? Just swooping in and out again - that is the Ninja way...!

First things first: what a lovely character, and what an abundance of colour! I like those very much. It's very festive and very sweet-looking...!
There are but two things I think don't work as well for me, and that's primarily the shading on her sweater, which seems a bit extreme (those are some REALLY dark shades, compared to for example, her face) - slight over-use of the burn tool, I'm guessing.
The second thing is the snowflake pattern seemingly not being affected by creases and folds. I know it's impractical to go and hand-paint this kind of thing, but the smudge-tool set at 100 percent (hard-edged too) can be really nice to give the snowflakes a little 'shove' here and there. The liquify filter can be used, as well.

That's all I have! I wish you a pleasant day and an even better New Year. Cheers!

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Acaciathorn [2017-12-30 19:32:20 +0000 UTC]

I love the color choices! The greens and reds are so vibrant and cheerful. I really like the hat on the star, and the sprig of holly in her hair. Lovely work!

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Mobian-Shadowtails [2017-12-30 13:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Aw! It's so beautiful, I love the little star's hat. >w<

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