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Lavenkitty — Sketch: Lavender: Cliff
Published: 2010-01-25 01:51:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 505; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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Errr.. practice. I need to work on doing full body shots. As well as add some backgrounds too. Yes those things behind her are trees. Yes they are weird. So what makes them unique. I'm manipulating everything we know well into something similar but different to make you think.
And at the bottom of the cliff are little flowers, with floating petals lol. And plasma that is being sent back to the moon. ;D
Yeah that world is complicated and I need to write it all down. ffffffff.
What do you guys think? I think it's okay, especially for not even trying all that much. XD
Lazy.
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Comments: 27
Such a beautiful sketch!
I realy love Lavender's new look.
Your Anthro style is really unique.
The background is realy exotic.
It looks as though she's watching her home world, and just chilling you know? Relaxed and such.
Lavender is just an adorable OC of yours she is just adorable!!
I cant wait to see it when it's colored.
Your art style has improved alot, it went from Sonic style to Anthro.
Still evan though you've kinda quit Sonic style your art is still amazing to me and to others that support you and Lavender.
Simply Amazing e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Great job
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Make sure to point out anything you see wrong don't just focus on the good parts, I hate rejecting critiques though, but remember to put in the errors you see, I love knowing my errors. <3
I really really hate rejecting things. D:
If you don't see anything wrong suggest things you think I should add or maybe do with it. <3
Just don't always focus on the negative things, you need to put out a "positive, negative, then positive again" kind of thing. I'm pretty sure this is pretty new so let it slide since you may not be used to it.
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It was my first critque
I did find something alittle wrong though
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Ah so I can understand then, you learn as you go, be observant look at ever little detail you not only learn their mistakes but it's helps you as well actually, I got better by noticing things people usually over look. <3
You can go ahead and tell me, I won't bite.
It's better to know it now, than after it's done. D:
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The arm and the hand seem abit to small
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Ah yeah that was what I though mostly the hand but the arm might be a smidgen bit smaller, compared to her legs lol. Should be half the thickness I think. o3o
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I need to practice on my arms and hands to my the arms come out to long and the hands come out big and the figners are long
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Yup same. XD
I tend to make the hands too small lol.
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The body and the head come out good but my weaknesses are arms, hands, legs, and height with 2 people in a picture
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Yeah I have trouble with them too.. D:
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Her feet and hands look really good this time!
I love this sort of pose. I keep trying to myself, but won't quite work .__.
If it's cool with you, I might use this to help me get it right >w<
Your style really comes through in this too! Sonic style is at 0%! Keep it up~
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Thanks dear.. <33
Yeah it's hard but not for me, it doesn't really take much for me to do this, there is some errors but once I upload the better sketch soon.. but.. lazy. :C
It's alright dear, I don't mind it, in the end I help you, no? <3333
Yay. <3
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I really like this. I've tried drawing things like this and they don't always turn out well. xD
Overall, though, this is well done. :3 However, I find the forehead to be a little small, as if it's pushed in somewhat. In addition to that, the eye's a little far back, but other than that, I think this is good! <3
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Yeah same here, which is why I'm doing rofl.
I had so many tell me "ADD MOAR BACKGROUNDS" at the National Portfolio day so I decided to do this for the heck of it. XDD
Yeah I know I fixed that now.. just too lazy to post it.. D:
Thanks dear <333
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You're very welcome, Shadz.
I haven't been on in so long, I can't wait to look at your new stuff! <3
That's good!
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it's better than ever
the body is great
continue like this ^^
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honestly, imho, the critique was pretty generous. nobody learns from stacks of compliments; we need constructive criticism if we want to get better.
for what it is, it's pretty good. to me this is a concept sketch and not a finished product.
here are my issues with it: her upper right arm is not in proportion with the lower section. her index finger is longer than her middle finger, that is not anatomically correct. the background is confusing and distracting. particularly the sign which i cannot read
and is greenish while the rest is done in red. the rest of the background i cannot identify. i think part of it might be her tail, and there could be a tree in there, but i can't quite figure it out. with that said, for a concept drawing this is perfectly acceptable. this is the kind of thing i have in front of me before i start out on a finished drawing.
good job! keep it up.
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Yeah I know I was going to tell her about adding some negatives in it too. D:
But yes criticism is what I need. <3
Yeah it is a concept most look like this, it was a really fast sketch so it is done a bit sloppy.
Ah yeah, I see that now I though something was akward about both the arm and the hand, will fix that sometime. I know the fingers sizes but I guess I didn't make it small enough did I? I'll fix that as well then. I'll just redo the arm in general cause it was bugging me anyways though.
Yeah the background was quick and not all that darkened so it's fine I'll make it darker soo, it's made that way so if I want to change it I can change it easily. There's no sign though, it might be the big bulky building that I didn't fill in with the red all the way, I'm just going to fill them out a littler darker then but this is sketch so not much to worry about there. And now I see what you mean, it was darker before, I guess that was just my eyes, as I was really tired then. So yeah I'll definitely darken that up a lot.
Greenish hmm, that's from looking at the red a lot, because of the white background you tend to see a green look too it, maybe I should change it to a gray instead of red? I keep it red so if I ink it I know what is inked or not but I see that now, I should go back to the grey or black sketch lines.
Yes the rest was her tail and the trees that are awkward. I hid it, and I was thinking of moving it so you can see it but right that second I wasn't bothering about it, but I'll take note on fixing that.
Basically she's on a cliff adoring flowers. The flowers are highly unrecognizable because their petals float, so it looks rather odd. Mainly everything in her world has something that floats. It's a wacky idea but I want to try and make it work. <3
But for now this is a rough sketch I wanted to know feedback on, usually most of my sketches don't always make it but this is one of the few that do. I may finish it I may not, not really sure yet, depends if I'll have the time.
But thank you for taking the time to make the critique, I appreciate it. <3
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no, the red sketch lines are fine. i guess what i'm seeing is the sign that says... kitty... something... do not use without permission...
idk, i guess it's a watermark or something.
and i hope people don't take my critiques personally. i am definitely not trying to be mean, i just know that i made my biggest improvements from direct criticism. good luck!
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Oh that, yeah it's a water mark, I tried to make it very light but able to be read too. D:
Oh no I don't find it mean, I know how to use that info and fix it, maybe to kids though haha. You usually have to ask if they don't say so if they don't know what it is just tell them you are generally going to tell them what is good and what they should work on, and if they reject just say what is good and move on, I never got in any insult or flame from doing that. C:
And yes same here, it really helps or if you study a picture too, that's pretty much how I do things. C:
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...ok ok ...the anatomy it's getting better
the only thing it's that the snot and the eye are a lotle off ...
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Yeah I made the eye too far back and too low, I'll move it up a tad. cause that's what makes the difference here lol.
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