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ParadoxSketchbook [2017-02-04 00:19:50 +0000 UTC]
okay...so in my notification area the icon for this deviation is obviously small and it looked totally different from what it actually is... I seriously thought you took a picture of someone wearing a full dress suit with vest and all then altered it a bit with filters.
I click it and wala... there are no clothes or people anywhere.Β
I would say the difference between the focused part of the picture plus the unfocused part is too drastic... perhaps make it a bit more subtle.. or blended in? The color weight between warm neutrals (browns and green toned gray) and cold neutrals (blue toned gray) is too even to create a specific mood so perhaps work on adjusting some of the colors? I would also suggest you give more highlight to the actual leaf but by fixing the unfocused area in the back this should help... unless you really want to add highlights you could. I would think just making the ice on the leaf a touch brighter would do the trick or making the surrounding areas directly by the leaf darker (staying with the cold blue tones).
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Linealonhoiden [2017-01-31 08:42:49 +0000 UTC]
It turned our really good! Good jobΒ Β Can't wait to see what you'll do next. (:
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