DoomsEye [2009-09-18 05:12:04 +0000 UTC]
Most excellent! *claps* This is very well done! The fights were very detailed, and I was on the edge of my seat reading them. I hope Slash and Nina get involved in the actual fighting soon enough.
I actually expect it, seeing as how her employees were attacked and HER facility was blacked out for quite some time.
Bravo! I look forward to the next chapter!
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lovalmidas In reply to DoomsEye [2009-09-19 12:53:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot. I was wondering if my writing has become too technical. Nina and Slash will more action in the next installment!
Oh, when you said 'her', were you meaning Ruby or Amberly (I think it's the former)?
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