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Kantorock [2017-09-12 21:05:09 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy the idea of the story behind this piece. The art itself is great, with Siavash's expression crowning it. But... I cannot help but notice that either the Dalaran scribes likes to write their tomes similar to how manga are drawn, or you reversed the covers to the book Saellen's holding.
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lyciphur [2016-11-25 05:23:15 +0000 UTC]
Thats lovely on so many levels
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MadAlleyCat In reply to lyciphur [2016-11-25 08:11:48 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, I'm glad you like it!
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HotaruShidosha [2016-11-24 20:37:24 +0000 UTC]
Looks amazing~!
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TailSlap [2016-11-18 23:30:05 +0000 UTC]
The expressions on their faces are just great! And I agree that they really go well with the background.
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MadAlleyCat In reply to Saellen [2016-11-18 13:11:12 +0000 UTC]
I did think of it actually - to begin wit, he was further down... but the composition looked so weird that I consciously cramped them a little more towards the middle. Otherwise they'd have to be further away or Siavash's ears would be cropped, together with Saellen's fingers. Let's pretend he stands on the table lol!
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Skreel [2016-11-18 03:20:10 +0000 UTC]
AAAA. I saw this on AA and thought I should break my terrified silence to say THIS IS BEAUTIFUL. I really love how well you blend characters into screenshot backgrounds! It's usually a case of "WHOA, THESE DON'T BELONG HERE", but here it looks so natural//downright LOVELY that you wouldn't at all notice at first glance. Also your lines/faces/everything are so expressive and make me so happy whenever you upload art.
The only thing I can recommend is maybe lightening the whole piece a little! I'm not sure if it's my monitor that's too dark, but some of the detail's lost in the darker hues of Saellen's clothing and Siavash's hair. Very minor/nitpickery though-- and it's not really much of a problem!
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MadAlleyCat In reply to Skreel [2016-11-18 06:57:27 +0000 UTC]
Awwh, thank you - I'm happy you like it!
It could very likely be a monitor thing - I know that my main monitor shows things lighter than my 2nday! I usually flip it to the 2ndary just to check for good measure, before uploading, but sometimes it's not always enough. It's especially hard with pictures that are supposed to be darker than average, like here where they're in a vaguely lid hall, or the previous where they're passing a narrow street.
I've tried to do some tests on the monitor, but apparently it's not made it much better. Perhaps I should try make a refreshed attempt just to check if I can do anything else.
Thanks for the feedback!
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