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Published: 2009-07-30 21:51:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 5399; Favourites: 141; Downloads: 89
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Update: a bit of reworking on the water and colours.Hmm, I guess this is inspired by the film "Minority Report"...
Model [link] by *almudena-stock
Water reflections [link] by ~nighty-stock
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Oh..I missed all your new deviations
That's fabulous.
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Awww… ich glaube XXX gehört zu meinen Mo-Favoriten. Echt unglaublich was du aus dem Stock gemacht hast. Der Kopf, das Wasser, einfach alles ist perfekt.
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its so original ^^ ...could be a dd, very well done
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Thank you very much!
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Wow das ist mal wieder ein moonshine bild wie ich sie soo sehr mag. Dein scifi stuff ist toll, finde die idee immer so überraschend simpel mit so krasser wirkung.
Geniales bearbeiten des stocks übrigens sieht klasse aus!
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Also ich finde es sehr schick gemacht...vorallem das Wasser! Wow! 
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Vielen Dank, freut mich sehr, dass es dir gefällt, auch wenn ich dich so verändert habe.
Ich werde mir die Elektroden nochmal vorknö
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Ist doch immer spannend wenn man so stark verändert wird.
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ah, so gefällts mir um einiges besser 
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I would suggest that you remove all of the spiral work and have a look at the wave effect created. You either want to have the spiraling follow that wave effect more or cast a shadow to give the impression that the spiraling is above the whole piece. I think the skin either needs more shine or more texture. Genereally this looks a bit unfinished compared to the rest of your work but it wouldn't take much to remove that impression.
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Thank you very much.
I removed the spirals and reworked the waves - maybe it's a bit better now.
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Ok well, I don't have a premium membership but I will give my opinion.
Although the overall composition of the piece is beautiful, and laid out nicely, I feel that it is missing something. The manipulation is good, but the swirl on the body could have been worked on a little bit better. The "liquid" that she is submerged in is believable to a point. When it gets to around her head it seems a little off. I think if you go back to it in a few days, there are things that you could tweak and improve upon, but other than what I've said it is a nice piece and has great potential. ^_^
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Thank you very much!
The points you mentioned also bother me when I look at it...I'll rework this piece in the next days when the motivation is back.
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Glad to hear that you'll go back to it. ^_^
and your welcome. ^_^
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Oh, I totally thought of Minority Report when I saw this! ^_^
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vielleicht ne etwas detailliertere Wasseroberfläche nehmen und weichere Striche malen?
Ist aber schön geworden, mag Scifizeugs^^
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Ja, wenn ich wieder Lust habe, werde ich das tun.
Danke dir, freut mich, dass es dir trotzdem gefällt.
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ja, hab mir den Stock angeguckt und muss sagen "Daumen hoch"
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Dankeschön!
Hab das Bild jetzt nochmal etwas überarbeitet.
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Cool! I totally see Minority Report in this one!
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