Shin-Ty-san [2011-07-28 04:48:21 +0000 UTC]
The lineart is completely sound. What I would give to render with such detail and life. Chamba would approve, I think. But, yes, the comp is indeed lacking. It almost looks like separate images PS's together rather hastily. And lastly, the warrior woman up front with the bone-type chest plate? The energy covering her hands should NOT be brown. Very, VERY bad choice. Unless you thought it was some kind of fur hand mitt, by which you would be forgiven.
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pixelisedmind In reply to Shin-Ty-san [2011-07-28 10:36:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the criticism, I appreciate the time and effort.
The energy on the lady's hands is actually black with an odd red glow, as part of the writer's design, but I suppose that it's not executed to the best of my ability. Thanks for the pointers!
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