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Published: 2012-04-23 23:04:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 15504; Favourites: 1889; Downloads: 567
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I have scratched my head over this for a while and just can't decide how to improve it.. I think it's the composition that bugs me, but I just can't put my finger on what it is.So I'd love to hear any constructive criticism you may have to offer!
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what.... WHAT?! A Daily Deviation? Are you serious?! I am so incredibly not worthy!
I seriously feel like I have enough excitement in me right now to backflip from here to mexico. (which is a very long way, in case you were wondering.)
Thank you thank you THANK YOU to everyone who has commment, faved and viewed! I am going to do everything within my ability to thank all of you, but I will probably run out of steam at some point, so THANK YOU!
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Thank you, I am very glad that you like it!
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Thank you for your kind words! I am glad you like my work!
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aaawh thank you so much for including me in such a lovely feature!
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This is such an amazing, optimistic and happy photo! I was kind of a lonely kid that never quite fit in and books offered me a great way to expand my knowledge.
I still don't fit in, but as an adult, that's now part of my charm!
This is a definite fave. Your photos are so bright and vibrant.
I'd be interested to know what it is that bothers you about it when you figure it out.
You know what bothers me? The fingerprints on the stars! Wear gloves!
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Why thank you, glad you like it!
So glad you never conformed, not fitting in is a very admirable trait!
Haha I know I know, one of those little details that I missed until I had already finished the shoot!
Thanks again, and sorry for how late this reply is!
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Not at all...we all have lives outside of dA! I enjoy hearing from you whenever you have time.
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Green button in the upper RH corner!
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I know what is missing to make this so freaking cool!
You need a larger star - Larger than all the others. To be you focal point and it needs to be placed on the binding. So it looks like a shooting star with the pages streaming out behind it!!! OH, and leave the other smaller stars in... JUST add the largest star to the binding. Oooooo! And I just thought of this- angle the shot so the star is shooting up! Please try it!!! 
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that is a very neat idea! I will have to try it once I get a hold of some more of these stars... and some free time.
Thanks so much for your comment!
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great photo!
how do you get the pages open like that?
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thank you!
I got the pages open by putting clothespins inbetween them.
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Thanks for telling me! It really helps!!!
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Hello! This photo has been featured in my weekly Friday Feature . Thank you for the wonderful photo & keep up the great work! ♥
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too kind of you, thank you so much! I truly appreciated it!
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aw thank you! I really appreciate it!
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Well deserved! I figured it'd happen sooner or later ;D
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thanks so much, very glad you like it!
hehe I will try not to dissapoint!
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hehe I'll take that as a compliment! Thank you!
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This picture is really beautiful. I love the colours, the stars, the book; Just everything! Well done!
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thank you, I am so very glad that you like it!
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Awww...your idea is sooooo incredibly magic !!! 
P.S. i am not good in making critiques....i saw it, loved it and faved!
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aww well thank you! I am so glad that you like it!
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You are very welcome! <3
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thanks so very much!
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