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Published: 2012-03-29 15:41:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 515; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 7
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Description unbirthday present for
or birthday present, however you'd like to think of it.

i just lumped random things together so i have no idea what exactly this is.....I CAN'T DRAW CLOUDS
oh and i realised that can still see the obvious brush strokes in the black bushes OOPS
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Comments: 6

Maxis-Geryon [2012-03-29 23:34:35 +0000 UTC]

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Alright, here's what I'll give to this: I like the overall idea, the coloring, the proportions of your girl and the effects you've used. It really helps that you made a manual gradient of the sky on the back and of course I like what you did with the green and yellow clouds and of course the water!

Now, for the parts you need to fix: The first glaring problem here is the perspective on the buildings. Despite how nice to look at your piece is, the weird perspective on the building throws this off! I suggest you visit artists hospital here in D.A or look up perspective books.

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M-A-F [2013-02-01 12:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Ah yeah, this was pretty awesome, I like the concept. The plants and clouds and everything looks cool ^^

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SabrieI In reply to M-A-F [2013-02-01 16:37:56 +0000 UTC]

the buildings dont though, coz i got lazy lololol

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M-A-F In reply to SabrieI [2013-02-01 20:00:03 +0000 UTC]

meh whatever 2d

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Yagamiseven [2012-03-29 19:20:36 +0000 UTC]

She is cute and the world she walk away stirs my curiosity

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SabrieI In reply to Yagamiseven [2012-03-31 03:07:23 +0000 UTC]

yay thanks

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