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sagitterius12 β€” Marilyn Monroe

Published: 2012-08-17 23:54:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1574; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 17
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Description My painting of Marilyn Monroe.
Made with pencil.
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Comments: 19

amateurspirits [2012-09-09 19:36:58 +0000 UTC]

nice rendering!

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sagitterius12 In reply to amateurspirits [2012-09-09 21:39:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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VeronikaKru [2012-09-07 18:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Hum, we can nothing but regret she hadn't been smiling like this more often. A beautiful woman with beautiful soul, yet so fucked up at the same time. Ah, well, I guess we all are in our own ways.
Anyway, this is a very nice attempt for a photorealistic drawing. Her face, hair, body and clothing turned out very well, very vivid and impressive.

Summary: Here comes the friendly slap - the right dark area should have been smooth and black as hell. Certainly not this messy hatching which kind of spoils the general impact of this otherwise beautiful drawing. Also I would took another shot of this drawing or re-scan it and properly crop it, so there would be no white spots at the edge. 'Tis details like these which matters. Once again, hats off for this gorgeous drawing.

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sagitterius12 In reply to VeronikaKru [2012-09-07 19:21:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment. Yes, after reading your critique I realised that the right area could be darker. Its actually looks almost black in real life but my scanner made it look like this. I will pay more attention to details like this in the future. I'm a young artist and I have a lot to learn

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VeronikaKru In reply to sagitterius12 [2012-09-07 19:33:17 +0000 UTC]

I gave you just a few suggestions for I thought you'd appreciate them more than a simple pat on your shoulder, telling you this drawing is beautiful.
Yeah, freaking scanners and their endless endeavour to ruin every drawing around...
Anyway, welcome on deviantART! If you'd feel like talking to somebody, do not hesitate to note me.

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sagitterius12 In reply to VeronikaKru [2012-09-07 19:54:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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avip-dee [2012-09-04 20:06:38 +0000 UTC]

ΠΊΡ€ΡƒΡƒΡƒΡ‚ΡŒ!

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sagitterius12 In reply to avip-dee [2012-09-04 20:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Бпасибо

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BBlle [2012-08-29 12:28:58 +0000 UTC]

Amazing !!

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sagitterius12 In reply to BBlle [2012-08-29 13:22:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Chupkenzi [2012-08-24 00:50:15 +0000 UTC]

wow, very nice, and she looks very happy on this drawing

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sagitterius12 In reply to Chupkenzi [2012-08-24 04:13:22 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for commenting!

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zack-pack [2012-08-22 06:14:06 +0000 UTC]

It's more of a canvas sketch than a "Painting" or whatever you call it. a painting would refer that you used "Paint"

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sagitterius12 In reply to zack-pack [2012-08-22 07:56:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for commenting! Its not on canvas, its on paper. And Im foreign so I maybe dont understand the word "painting" right. But I thought it means "picture" or something like that.

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zack-pack [2012-08-21 19:17:50 +0000 UTC]

that's really good!

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sagitterius12 In reply to zack-pack [2012-08-21 19:30:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Im glad you like my work!

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jaguarry3 [2012-08-17 23:55:23 +0000 UTC]

excellent work

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sagitterius12 In reply to jaguarry3 [2012-08-18 00:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Betuwefotograaf [2012-08-17 23:54:51 +0000 UTC]

I like it.....

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