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SaneiVio — You Let Him Die...

Published: 2010-10-22 21:08:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 5604; Favourites: 182; Downloads: 26
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Description It watched as the people passed by.

They could see it so plainly in sight, but they try to ignore it.
Children are prohibited to go near it.

From a distance it would only seem like a regular pokemon, but if you look closely, it's merely a reminder of the tragic accident that happened 20 years ago.

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Chris was a nice boy, friendly and caring. Though, he had no friends. He was cursed. Doomed to die at a young age. Nobody would go near him in fear that they would catch it too.

He was always ill and frail. He had to stay close to home, so he couldn't go far and have a chance to be a pokemon trainer like the others.

He was sad about it, but he kept on going.

On his 13th birthday, Chris' grandmother told him that she was sure he would make a friend that day.

He sighed and smiled, "You know that nobody is allowed near me, Gram. The town hates me."

"It's god's gift to you today." She replied.

She was right. Later on, Chris had made a friend that day.

He found a baby Poochyena that day in the back woods near his house. I came right up to him and licked his hand. He knew then that he had a best friend.

Some trainers would challenge them, they won some, they lost some.
They were always in good spirits though. Always smiling.

After a year, he came to realize that it had suffered illness like him, he wasn't sure if it was his fault or not, but it never cared. Poochyena would never leave his side. He was loyal.

Chris felt better with Poochyena, he didn't feel so alone.
~

On his 15th birthday, Chris had taken Poochyena to one of the famous buildings in his town. It was a tower about 10 stories high.

They stood outside an looked all the way up.

Poochyena whimpered a little but Chris told him it would be alright.

He didn't know what would happen...

People were running out of the building until it was empty.

Poochyena went into a fit, it knew something was wrong. Chris wouldn't listen to him, all he did was stand there staring at the building. He felt like he couldn't move.

The tower had smoke coming out of it.

Poochyena howled.

One of the rooms in the tower blew up and shards came falling down.

Finally Chris moved... But it was too late. A piece of the tower fell crushing his leg. People were still running from the building, some watched him from far away. Nobody did anything.

He pushed Poochyena away from him, trying to make him run. Poochyena stayed. It howled in horror, it tried to get the people to help. Still nobody helped.

Poochyena used Shadowball repeatedly at the tower piece in attempt to free his best friend. It was no use. Another piece came crashing down.

Chris flinched, it didn't crush him compleatly yet. He reached and patted Poochyena's head. He smiled.

"You will always be... my best friend... Poochyena." He whispered.

Poochyena jolted back as the last piece fell, crushing Chris beneath.

The people backed away from the collapsing building.

Poochena backed away as well.

It stared. It lost it's only friend, it's best friend. And he was the only one killed. It howled, but not in sadness. It was rage. Full fledged rage.
It howled longer, louder. It's fur standing now.

The howl was no longer a howl, but instead it was words.

"WHY?! WHY DID HE HAVE TO DIE?!!?!" It screamed.

The people staggered back in horror. Poochyena couldn't speak.

It faced them. Shodowballs flew in every which direction, "HE DID NOTHING WRONG!! AND YOU LET HIM DIE!!!"

People ran away, some people were hit and faded away to dust.

"YOU LET HIM DIE!!! WHY DID YOU LET HIM DIE?!?!"
~

Eventually the Poochyena fell ill and died, but it's ghost remained. To this day it haunts the people. Every year on that day, he would kill someone.

If you went close enough to it you could hear it whispering.

"You let him die...."


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This was way more sad than creepy.

I totally could have written this better. I think it sucked. xD
The picture was "eh" too.

But anyway.

I was bored and decided to make this for you people. :3
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Comments: 138

DaikuHiroshiama [2013-07-04 00:40:50 +0000 UTC]

Why did they let him die? All because of an illness, that's complete bull! I must say I do love the art that goes along with the story.

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DaikuHiroshiama [2013-07-04 00:39:15 +0000 UTC]

Why did they let him die? All because of an illness, that's complete bull! I must say I do love the art that goes along with the story.

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Grace3333 [2013-04-07 02:12:42 +0000 UTC]

Dawww so sad *sniff* ...love that story ;-;

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nasubiplz [2011-06-05 05:37:20 +0000 UTC]

I'd be saddened beyond BELIEF if Nee-chan ever died... Thanks for showing us this story. It was one of the first Creepypastas to ever make me cry...

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KaitouKidnLucyPThief [2011-05-01 10:44:12 +0000 UTC]

Don't mind if I Comment again but...Lookie... o 3 o

[link]

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ratjay [2011-04-15 00:18:53 +0000 UTC]

poor chis... I would have saved you if i was there...

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AisutheIceWolf [2011-03-28 21:55:05 +0000 UTC]

Question. How did you post this story? I want to post a story of my own, but I haven o idea how..

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SaneiVio In reply to AisutheIceWolf [2011-03-28 23:04:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, okay. One, you have to join the group with admin's permission. Once you get in, go to the gallery and look at the folders. Find the folder you feel your pasta is fit for, and click the plus sign to contribute to the folder. Once you contribute, is will send a notification to the admin and they will have to accept it. Don't be upset if it takes a long time because there are a lot of people submitting things as well.

I hope this helped.

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AisutheIceWolf In reply to SaneiVio [2011-03-30 23:51:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. I just need to write a Creepypasta. Haha.. I have a story, yeah, but it's half Creepypasta, have good ending. A few of my friends like it but..

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AisutheIceWolf [2011-03-05 05:48:18 +0000 UTC]

Poor Poochyena. I've always liked it ever since they came out with Ruby, and I first saw it (even if it was when it was chasing The Prof.) It's sad, but I was too tired to cry, so I'm sorry for that. Another thing is my Bestie's name is Chris. I showed this to him, and he though he was gonna die. Good job scaring the crap outta my friend!

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SaneiVio In reply to AisutheIceWolf [2011-03-05 22:34:42 +0000 UTC]

ROFLMAO!
Tell Chris I'm sorry. x'D
Poochyena is my favorite too. And its totally alright that you didn't cry, I think enough cried.
I didn't think it would be that sad.

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AisutheIceWolf In reply to SaneiVio [2011-03-06 01:35:54 +0000 UTC]

it happens though, right? and I'll tell him. He was literally freaking out,screaming, "I'M GONNA DIE!!! I'M GONNA DIE". I laughed a little.

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JelliPuddi [2011-03-04 01:55:38 +0000 UTC]

I can't lie... This story actually brought tears to my eyes, it was short, but nice twist... Normally in stories it's an animals that dies. ;A;

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SaneiVio In reply to JelliPuddi [2011-03-04 20:35:29 +0000 UTC]

aguog ; A ;
I'm sorry!
Yeah, I wanted something to happen where Chris would try to save Poochyena before the last fall. Animal cruelty is horrible. D;

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JelliPuddi In reply to SaneiVio [2011-03-04 20:45:16 +0000 UTC]

Lol, don't feel bad, I actually haven't cried in a while, it feels good~

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ryomon321 [2011-02-18 22:19:17 +0000 UTC]

That was so sad, but I really loved it. It was a very touching and sad story and that is what is what makes it awesome. Good job!

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SaneiVio In reply to ryomon321 [2011-02-18 23:27:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
I'm glad you liked it. <3

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ryomon321 In reply to SaneiVio [2011-02-24 21:59:18 +0000 UTC]

No prob

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EpicEspeonHLL [2011-02-12 22:45:13 +0000 UTC]

; n ;
One of the saddest pastas I've read...very well done.

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SaneiVio In reply to EpicEspeonHLL [2011-02-12 23:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Snowpelt-IceClan [2011-02-12 21:31:16 +0000 UTC]

Great job! *Tries to thumbs up but realises two things: dA has no Like/Dislike, and that her 'sona form has no thumbs*

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SaneiVio In reply to Snowpelt-IceClan [2011-02-12 23:11:51 +0000 UTC]

Rofl. >U<
Thank you lol. <3

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Snowpelt-IceClan In reply to SaneiVio [2011-02-13 01:23:50 +0000 UTC]

Anytime~

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kyokyolu [2011-01-21 09:22:04 +0000 UTC]

;_; omg, poor poochyena!

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SaneiVio In reply to kyokyolu [2011-01-22 19:04:33 +0000 UTC]

I know. I'm so evil.

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kyokyolu In reply to SaneiVio [2011-01-22 20:40:52 +0000 UTC]

A really great story, though! Kudos!

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SaneiVio In reply to kyokyolu [2011-01-24 15:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much~

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kyokyolu In reply to SaneiVio [2011-01-24 18:18:45 +0000 UTC]

Awww, you are welcome!

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a-scarf-for-kitsu [2011-01-16 02:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh, so you're the one that wrote this story!

[/didn'tknowthatalotofpokemoncreepypastaoriginatesfromdeviantart]

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SaneiVio In reply to a-scarf-for-kitsu [2011-01-16 02:41:22 +0000 UTC]

Is this somewhere else? o 3 o
Do you know the link? xD

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a-scarf-for-kitsu In reply to SaneiVio [2011-01-16 02:56:42 +0000 UTC]

I've read it before and it wasn't on here or on f yeah pokemon creepy pasta.. |: I can't remember where though. Sorry! D: I love the story though. :3

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SaneiVio In reply to a-scarf-for-kitsu [2011-01-16 03:28:02 +0000 UTC]

No problem!
Thank you so much. :3
I sort of thought it was crap till people started spamming me telling me it was awesome. xDDD

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KaitouKidnLucyPThief [2011-01-03 14:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Aww...what a sad story... *sees Poochyena and goes close to him*

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SaneiVio In reply to KaitouKidnLucyPThief [2011-01-03 16:12:56 +0000 UTC]

NO HE'LL EAT YOU!!!

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KaitouKidnLucyPThief In reply to SaneiVio [2011-01-04 07:09:28 +0000 UTC]

EH?! O _ O!!! *looks at the poochyena infront of me and gets ready to run away*

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SaneiVio In reply to KaitouKidnLucyPThief [2011-01-04 15:34:33 +0000 UTC]

I WILL EAT YOU

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KaitouKidnLucyPThief In reply to SaneiVio [2011-01-05 06:34:33 +0000 UTC]

O . o!! Gosh if only my Mightyena was here~ Dx *runs away*

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SaneiVio In reply to KaitouKidnLucyPThief [2011-01-05 13:13:20 +0000 UTC]

I will protect joo

lololol

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KaitouKidnLucyPThief In reply to SaneiVio [2011-01-05 13:38:16 +0000 UTC]

LMAO!! XD Had you ever notice...That the "lol" Symbol looks like a drowning guy? xP I simply bet he's not Laughing Out Loud..xD

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SaneiVio In reply to KaitouKidnLucyPThief [2011-01-05 17:29:43 +0000 UTC]

Oh oh, yes! Now he's really not laughing!

~~~~~/\~~~~~lol~~~~~~~

There's also the dancing lol guy.
lol /o/ \o\ \o/ /o\ lol

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KaitouKidnLucyPThief In reply to SaneiVio [2011-01-06 01:01:00 +0000 UTC]

Hahaz~!!! XDD

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bearhuunter [2010-12-22 01:04:18 +0000 UTC]

this is so sad

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SaneiVio In reply to bearhuunter [2010-12-22 14:51:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry.

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bearhuunter In reply to SaneiVio [2010-12-22 20:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Its okay

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Imanasok [2010-12-21 18:16:13 +0000 UTC]

It is so sad, but now i love Poochyana even more

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SaneiVio In reply to Imanasok [2010-12-21 20:07:36 +0000 UTC]

It's my favorite pokemon!
Haha, I'm glad that you liked it. C:

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XxxOceanXSapphirexxX [2010-12-18 01:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Poor Poochyena p_p
I like how you write the story =3
And the picture is great, too. It has really emotion in it!

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SaneiVio In reply to XxxOceanXSapphirexxX [2010-12-18 16:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
It was really all off the top of my head. xD
I wanted to add more, but I couldn't think of much else. I'm so glad you liked it though! C:

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Princessnapped [2010-12-06 20:27:10 +0000 UTC]

Poor Poochyena and Christ! My god, this gave me GOOSEBUMPS. Ffff... D: The picture's amazing too; it definitely captures the emotions as the story did.

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SaneiVio In reply to Princessnapped [2010-12-06 21:03:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you~
This was mostly off the top of my head.
I had originally just went with the Poochyena, but then I decided that I would try to draw Chris.
I wish I could have thought up more. I should try, but yeah. Thank you so much!

I'm surprised that so many people love it, I've even made people cry.

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