naomiyui [2013-09-14 14:20:05 +0000 UTC]
wow~ i think you improve a little
lovely colour you've pick :3
and i love what you did on the leaves of the apple earing
i never thought of doing that ; u ; bbbb
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i love how you work with my lines ; u ;
and i do want to see more of it and i have some suggestion for you~<333
//i'm not really good with this,but i do hope you can try to edit and see a change?
1) you can try to play more shades
//the tree behind,try to use 2-3 tones darker to make it look really getting deep inside the forest.
2) Try avoiding to use almost similar colour (eg.the bird)
//i think you can use a royal blue for it,as it will make the bird stands out even it's small.
//the sky, in this picture because the skin and the top is white,it clashes with the sky which doesnt make it stands out, what you can do here is try to make an evening sunset skyish look purple and orange?)
3) adding highlights on some area
//basically the hair, cheek, elbow, knee, shoe(those that reflects the light)
thank you for looking dont feel pressure and you dont have to follow what i say
thanks for always being such a nice friend
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Simtorta In reply to naomiyui [2013-09-14 18:02:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it
Thank you for your kind words and good advices - I will try to apply
At first I wanted to make a blue bird also, but in the end I did it resembles a European robin ( I blame DC comics |D)
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naomiyui In reply to Simtorta [2013-09-17 11:22:23 +0000 UTC]
no problem at all ; u ;
i can see you can improve so i just post to let you know
; u ; lol XD but european robin are very beautiful,
i love them alot too DDD
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