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Published: 2014-11-03 18:44:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1141; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 0
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Filmed by my father in Mirow, Poland in 2012; Actually there were some people on the footage I had to remove, but I am still pretty happy with overall result
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wiwla [2014-11-13 14:55:00 +0000 UTC]

łup i tup tup tup, widać że wraca do domu po całym dniu roboty- też się wtedy nie bawię z płynnym hamowaniem

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Stray-Soul In reply to wiwla [2014-11-14 17:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Kto by się tam podjazdem przejmował

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DameOdessa [2014-11-06 13:10:13 +0000 UTC]

Amazing, my friend, it seems so real!
Dragons exist, I knew it!!

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Stray-Soul In reply to DameOdessa [2014-11-06 19:41:10 +0000 UTC]

Of course they exist!

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NightrunnerXM [2014-11-06 00:06:26 +0000 UTC]

Overall, I'd say it's not bad. You've got some good video editing going on, and the model looks pretty solid.

However...well...it's mechanical, and doesn't seem to take into account physical forces like momentum and gravity. I'd have to say it looks like a plane making a carrier landing...and even they don't make such abrupt stops. They'd rip themselves apart trying.

A flying animal making a landing like this would crash into the cave because of forward momentum...and would probably have broken legs from the initial impact with the ground. Flying animals tilt their body back and spread their wings as wide as possible to bleed off some of that momentum, using their wings and tail as airbrakes. Then they flap to generate reverse thrust and get rid of the rest before they make touchdown.

Now...since I'm not sure if you made this model yourself or if it's the DAZ MilDragon, though I think it's the MilDragon...but you'll need to work on the wings. Skin stretches during flight, and that would be part of how the dragon would generate lift. This one's...not doing that. It's a flat surface, like a dinner table, and pretty much stays that way when folded. So, no lift.

Now, I don't mean to imply that this is bad, or rain on your parade. I like the concept, and most of the execution is pretty good There are just a few things that need to be taken into account in the future to make things even better and more believable. So I hope this helps you do that!

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Stray-Soul In reply to NightrunnerXM [2014-11-06 19:40:50 +0000 UTC]

You're perfectly right, it's one of my weakest landing (third to this date), it's result of being constantly on time pressure and don't having enough time to make art when there is so much work to do But it's not DAZ Milenium Dragon, I hate overuse of it, it's my own 3D mesh, build, textured and rigged from scratch

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NightrunnerXM In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-06 21:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Well...without knowing specifics about your process and what all you're running into in terms of time, I strongly suggest you slow down and remove the time pressure (or as much of it as possible). Moving too fast generates mistakes, which take time to fix, which makes deadlines harder to meet.

Focus on doing things right. The more you do that, the faster you'll get. With time, you'll figure out what you're doing the long way and can do just as well with a less involved process. You'll find time savers when you slow down. It's kinda counter-intuitive, I know, but it works.

Really? That ain't the MilDragon? Huh. Well, color me impressed!

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Stray-Soul In reply to NightrunnerXM [2014-11-08 15:35:10 +0000 UTC]

It's precious tip, but I've already used that - I am programmer, I am trying to work on optimal time level, it's just deadlines are already exhausted and we need to hurry. But I still favor doing things right then doing them fast, the other way is just borrowing time from QA process which must be payed back with bonus. Not worth it

As for dragon, here's close-up to prove it's not Milenium:



It's not very good model, but I still like it

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Simbores [2014-11-04 22:44:08 +0000 UTC]

Great! Seems a true movie taken with the camera!

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Stray-Soul In reply to Simbores [2014-11-05 20:53:02 +0000 UTC]

... you have to be just the right person with the right lens in the right time!

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Simbores In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-05 22:47:53 +0000 UTC]

.... and a very lucky person!

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Stray-Soul In reply to Simbores [2014-11-06 19:32:58 +0000 UTC]

You bet!

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Wimpy-person [2014-11-04 00:55:58 +0000 UTC]

it looks rather stiff :/

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Stray-Soul In reply to Wimpy-person [2014-11-04 14:21:00 +0000 UTC]

Yup, I am not exactly in my best form, too long break...

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cezary150199 [2014-11-03 20:10:03 +0000 UTC]

Jak mogłeś smoka podglądać? Im też się prywatność należy.

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Stray-Soul In reply to cezary150199 [2014-11-04 14:20:12 +0000 UTC]

Stałem z siostrą obok i podziwialiśmy

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cezary150199 In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-04 16:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Podglądałeś tego biednego smoka XD.

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Stray-Soul In reply to cezary150199 [2014-11-05 20:58:17 +0000 UTC]

No ba! On taki biedny nie był, wcześniej przegonił stado owieczek, zdaje się że pożarł nawet jakąś krowę Ale chłopi jakoś nie ścigają, nie wiem, może mają siłę argumentu, a smok zareagował na to argumentem siły?

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cezary150199 In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-06 08:10:08 +0000 UTC]

Nie wiem. Może XD.
Ale gdybyś go podglądał a on załatwiał sprawy "królewskie" to byś nie miał za ładnego nagrania XD.

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Stray-Soul In reply to cezary150199 [2014-11-06 19:32:48 +0000 UTC]

E tam, dobrze że nie podzielił losu księcia Erazma którego zabito pociskiem katapulty gdy ten usiadł na kiblu w wieży w swoim zamku w trakcie oblężenia...

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cezary150199 In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-08 18:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Biedny XD. Ale biedniejsi ludzie na których spadły resztki jego królewskich spraw XD.

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Stray-Soul In reply to cezary150199 [2014-11-09 18:16:51 +0000 UTC]

I dlatego właśnie nie można podchodzić zbyt blisko do obleganego zamku, o!

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cezary150199 In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-12 14:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Bo dostanie się królewskimi fekaliami xD.

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MarcinMurach [2014-11-03 19:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Ale hamulce to ma zajebiste XD

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Stray-Soul In reply to MarcinMurach [2014-11-04 14:19:58 +0000 UTC]

"... ok, to jeszcze tylko lądowanie i... ŁUPS! Dlaczego ta trawa jest taka mokra i śliska?!"

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MarcinMurach In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-04 18:11:00 +0000 UTC]

Oj poszedł płyn hamulcowy.X} Brak zrobić przeglądek XD

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Stray-Soul In reply to MarcinMurach [2014-11-05 20:56:56 +0000 UTC]

Wymienić łuski, podregulować wewnętrzny ogień, naostrzyć ostrza na ogonie?

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MarcinMurach In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-06 18:44:48 +0000 UTC]

Spokojnie. Pan Zdzisiu nie takie rzeczy robił 8]

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Stray-Soul In reply to MarcinMurach [2014-11-06 19:27:20 +0000 UTC]

Tylko rachunek potem pięciocyfrowy... Aaah, I am ruined!

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MarcinMurach In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-07 18:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Nie no. Pan Zdzisio nie jest tak drogi. Tylko cztery cyferki 8]

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Stray-Soul In reply to MarcinMurach [2014-11-08 15:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Taa, ale pierwsza jest '9'...

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MarcinMurach In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-08 19:21:01 +0000 UTC]

Reszta też dziweiątki XD

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Stray-Soul In reply to MarcinMurach [2014-11-09 18:16:29 +0000 UTC]

E tam, wydawało mi się że widziałem przynajmniej jedną siódemkę.

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MarcinMurach In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-09 18:19:53 +0000 UTC]

A no tak. Przepraszam. Nie zauważyłem tej końcówki 97 groszy XD

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Bylika190 [2014-11-03 18:55:18 +0000 UTC]

smoczek wraca do domciu x3

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Stray-Soul In reply to Bylika190 [2014-11-04 14:19:08 +0000 UTC]

No ba!

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Bylika190 In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-04 16:34:39 +0000 UTC]

x333

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Tuptaju [2014-11-03 18:52:54 +0000 UTC]

O, Stray skończył.
Smok-żaluzja. .w.' 

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Stray-Soul In reply to Tuptaju [2014-11-04 14:19:02 +0000 UTC]

Roleta?

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Tuptaju In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-04 15:13:34 +0000 UTC]

Żaluzja. Sztywne skrzydła ma.

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Stray-Soul In reply to Tuptaju [2014-11-05 20:58:57 +0000 UTC]

No ba!

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Tuptaju In reply to Stray-Soul [2014-11-07 11:43:49 +0000 UTC]

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