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SecretlySyllan In reply to TangentExpress [2018-01-27 21:07:47 +0000 UTC]
That's great to hear, you really do have the skill to become an author, and a successful one at that. I've had the same dream, though writing has always been more of a hobby. I suppose my goals were always more about telling my stories than writing specifically - the medium didn't really matter. ^^' And you're a Slytherin too? That's awesome - hello!!
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TGDemento [2018-01-09 20:44:05 +0000 UTC]
For the record, this is what convinced me to watch you.
Egad, you're this good already? How the hell are you not devoting all of your time to writing, you're amazing! Your verbiage is superb, your descriptive flow is almost haunting, and your use of imagery and metaphor is god damn gorgeous.
As a fellow writer you have my respect, and I will be sorely disappointed if I don't see more like this from you. I totally get being shy about writing, but if this is the quality of your work, then I don't believe you have anything to be worried about.
I eagerly await your further works, be there any, and would love to chat with you about it should you ever feel so inclined.
Additionally, my submission for the title of this piece would be "The Market in the Mist."
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TangentExpress In reply to Ndzoodzoo [2017-12-27 06:48:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I have many strange dreams... my writing probably reflects that sometimes.
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MercenaryBlade [2017-12-14 17:34:13 +0000 UTC]
Not bad certainly an eerie and surreal setting that your words captured quite well! I'm not sure what exactly is going on here, I might guess it's purgatory or something.
Nice work once again
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MercenaryBlade In reply to TangentExpress [2017-12-14 18:44:02 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I've done that before.
Of course, always happy to give feedback to another writer.
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Ewah1000 [2017-11-19 02:58:27 +0000 UTC]
Yes, indeed you are a writer!!!! Maybe the title could be as simple as "The Watermelon" or "Melon" ?. X
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MerTheBrave [2017-10-14 21:33:18 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that's really good! Absolutely love it!
I write a bit too but I've been neglecting it lately... -_-'
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MerTheBrave In reply to TangentExpress [2018-08-10 04:03:40 +0000 UTC]
Ohmygosh I'm so sorry! I just reread this piece you wrote and I thought... I've commented on this already.
I can't believe I never replied to you I write fantasy stuff. Mostly medieval but I've been dabbling in some si-fi/steampunk over the past year.
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TangentExpress In reply to MerTheBrave [2018-08-10 21:29:11 +0000 UTC]
Haha, no worries! That's pretty cool, I mainly write fantasy as well, though some of my ideas have strayed into sci-fi territory. Medieval fantasy sounds interesting, are we talking medieval England, or...?
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MerTheBrave In reply to TangentExpress [2018-08-10 21:37:00 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I guess so Mostly like fictional locations and worlds with a medieval themed setting. I take inspiration from real historical clothing, weapons, and structures.
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TangentExpress In reply to MerTheBrave [2018-08-14 04:27:36 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see. What about dragons? Are there dragons? XD
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Phoenix-of-Pyrrhia [2017-08-23 22:42:01 +0000 UTC]
Ooooooo damn that's creepy and so GOOD
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raphaeldiestler [2017-08-08 06:55:40 +0000 UTC]
"A molten chunk of white gold," that's pretty good. Nice scene descriptions in this piece.
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brazenglory [2017-08-02 07:30:25 +0000 UTC]
I don't know what I did to encourage you to write something, but please tell me so I can do it some more! This is an absolutely spellbinding piece. I love the way you write, and I can honestly say I am more than a little jealous! The pacing was superb, the content was, I agree, more disconcerting than horrifying, but still got the point across.
Your descriptions, holy mother of everything, they are so fantastic! I could clearly see what you were describing in my mind's eye, and you did it without being overbearing or wordy. I love the part about the ravens, how they flew up to what you think is the rooftops, since you can't see through the smog.
I read this three times so far, and I want to read more. This has the potential to be an epic story. So very, very well done!
Thank you for the credit, although I feel I do not deserve it, as your work is astounding without my input.
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