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Published: 2005-05-08 11:22:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 1422; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 569
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This is, in my opinion, my best piece to date, but i still think there is room for improvement so could you give me some constructive critiscism to get rid of any bad bits i haven't noticed.Program/s: Photoshop only
Stock: Resurgere + sxc.hu
Time: 1 month maybe slightly more
PS: If you would like to make a render like the one in the middle just look for my "photoshop renders" tutorial in my gallery.
thanks all,
~Zeal
EDIT: Fixed the colouring of the top right, made it more like rain which is what it is supposed to be lol.
EDIT 2: Souped it up MAJORLY
EDIT 3: unsouped it majorly
, styles change lolEDIT 4: Rotated the lighting so it didn't cover up the huge amount of texture work I did at the top. Added some more texture to the left and got rid of the texture on the background. Got rid of the typo, and made it sharper.
Previous Versions:
Original: [link]
EDITS 1&2: [link]
EDIT 3: [link]
EDIT 4: Current.
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Comments: 24
Very abstract and very stylish, thx for the favourite.
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... did I comment on this already? If not, then I think it looks like a very delicate fiber-glass insect just lost control and crashed to the ground. Great work.
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Oh my god that's nice!
I can't really find anything to complain about!
And you do know how I feel about abstracts
Keep it up man!
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very very detailed im not sure how you could improve maybe make it bigger and ad more detail but thats alot of work so screw it still really good piece
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Very good, your hardwork shows. Keep up this level of intensity to improve yourself. Focus your focal point, the top seems a bit unfocused. Your focal point is still strong, but it could be stronger with more emphasis towards it.
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Its really sexy , just add some contrast to the layers with the lightning effects than it would look sexier and you could also put some more depth but thats just imo.
Oh btw I used your renders on this piece, freaking awesome renders!
[link]
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different and special, thats what i like about pieces, great work....
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yea - this is really, really, really nice man - lovely sharpness.
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wow, thats a lot of reallys, thx man
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Thanks for the comments all, glad you all like it
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not sure what needs to be worked out but its preety cool
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Great piece, very relaxing and organically abstract if that was what you were aiming for. I think there shuold be more of that splashing of bright colours to add some energy into the scene.
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i think the colors and lighting and everything, but 1 small thing i thought could make this better, if the main ' photoshop render ' was more in focus, or stood out more, and wasnt being covered by all that texture, but thats not that big of a problem it still looks great
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That's a nice style... Hmmm, over at the top it feels a bit weird, maybe a bit too much contrast or crowded. Other than that, great. keep it up
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Absolutely amazing. Definitely your best piece yet, beautiful.
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