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THEMYSTERYWRITER β The Silent Clown: A CreepyPasta Inspired Story
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Published: 2018-08-20 17:21:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 431; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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This is one of my first horror stories Iβve ever wrote. I am proud of this work, and it really got people going the first time I read it to a group. Please leave a comment Β Sorry for the nightmares and please feel free to leave any comments
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I couldn't finish reading it by the time it mentioned the girl being killed in front of a mirror, because I was worried that it might break the fourth wall and say now that you are reading it, the clown will come out of your computer screen and kill you. It seemed like pretty good writing, for what I saw. Some of it are a bit cliche, like the way he starts recording, it doesn't sound the way it would occur if it had really happened. I don't know if it reveals who he is recording the thing for, but I think if I was being chased by an undead clown, I would still spend a moment just staring into the camera, trying to find the right words. The thing about recording speech for most people is that they aren't being very fluent about it if they don't have a script or if they are talking to a specific person in the same room. Being able to record voicemail unless you do it often is sort of hard because you don't have the feedback you would in a conversation with an active listener. It might be interesting to actually record something like this with a loose script, in form of a video diary. By a loose script I mean not planning out each line in advance, because that would sound rehearsed. Just coming up with a line of events that have happened and go from there. But my problem is I'm on the autism spectrum, so I'm not very good at acting.
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I cna understand where you are coming from then. Maybe this form isnβt for everyone then. I mean, the original idea was to write out the whole story, but I decided to go with this route instead and it worked out fine. The speech was actually intended to sound like that because itβs more accurate to human speech; after all, we donβt speak with perfect grammar after all. But yes, I completely understand, an old friend of mien actually wanted to make this into a short film, but it never happened. Still, I really like the idea of turning this into a short film with a loose script. Thank you so much for this suggestion
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Holy...fucking...shit...! That was INCREDIBLY scary! Perfectly scary, to be exact!
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Oh wow, thank you XD
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You're welcome XD
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Hell, I'll even put this in my feature journal
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I gotta start writing that journal after I make a "Horror" folder in my favorites gallery.
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Just made that folder, but can't find where I put your stories at in my gallery XD
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Iβm sure you can find a way LOL
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Lol I put it in the right folder XD
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