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Published: 2006-11-03 00:49:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Page 4 of Election #1!(See my gallery for previous pages).
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Hm... I'm not too sure on the panel on the right side of the page - the one with her whole face in close-up. Seeing as it's covered so much by the word-balloons and all we really see of her face is one eye, the tip of her nose and some of the lips it strikes me (as a reader) as a "sloppy"/"lazy" lay-out job, and (as an artist) so much work for nothing. I'd have it completely removed and replaced wish some psychadellic pattern - wavy lines or something abstract as the panel just serves as a "backdrop" for the text. Other than that; looking good.
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