RubyRyn [2015-03-26 17:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Ooooh this is absolutely lovely! The proportions are perfect and the stripes are beautifully crisp and clean. The work you did in creating smooth shadows is also really pretty. With that said, he feels a little as if he's floating in space. I think this is because you've included the beginning of the environment rather then just leaving him solo. I think this piece would be strengthen if you included a little more reflection in the water and possibly pulled some background elements from your reference photo (trees, rocks, etc) and included them. But that might just be my tendency to over fill the page Overall, this is a lovely piece - well done!
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philippeL [2015-01-09 22:20:29 +0000 UTC]
very amazing! I knew it was ballpen