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Published: 2010-10-11 22:08:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 683; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 11
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In an epic leap, he flies over the explosion and sinks the claws from his cybernetic hand into the foundation of the building and begins to work his way up to the top. The mission continues....Here is the rest of the book...[link]
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That would be some scary shit to see him comin! Id be buckin immediately!
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..or on an elevator off that floor he is on!
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Thats not fast enough. Im goin out the window and prey a garbage can is conveniently down below lol
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hi could i ask you something ? well in the comic-makers club where could i put the rest of my comic book pages?
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Either Original Comic Art or General looking at your work. I read a few pages. You put a lot into it! I love it.
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hey thx man i am u liked it
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I've read your comic up to this page and you have a fantastic understanding on how a comic works! Each page transitions nicely to the other. However, there are some panels that would use a little dynamism or a bit of work on the perspective, but just a pinch! Other than that, you have a very unique style of drawing, I really enjoy it. c:
Keep up the good work!
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For example, the last panel of this page, I can get that he is climbing up to the top of this tall building, but I can't tell how tall it is. Perhaps you would have a really crazy perspective that shows a little bit of the top? imo, would make me feel like "holy crap! look at him go!"
But that is my opinion. c:
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I did that on purpose. The climax of the prologue itself is the building's actual size. If you notice, all I give are clips and angles of little bits and peices of the entire enviornment. Im pinpointing on their infultration techniques. Soon you will see the entire desert rinky dink base transform into an elite strong hold. Just stay tuned! Great attention to detail tho.
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Thats pretty cool.....there's more doods on the roof? XD.....I'll wait and find out....
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