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weewill In reply to ??? [2013-12-08 14:30:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks very much for your critique. I really appreciate it!
You're completely right about the flatness. I'm trying to learn how to put folds and shadows to the clothes and lighting, though it's really difficult in watercolor
As for the hair, it's kinda like my style, no lines usually with color it'll have shadings, but in this pcture I intended to emphasize the negatives, so complete black and white only. I'll find another way to make the hair look less flat in my future works.
Once again thanks a lot for stopping by and share your thought about my work. Have a nice day!
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Belittled9 [2013-12-08 11:26:23 +0000 UTC]
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Technique
Impact
Nice coloring, even nicer drawing. I like the simplicity it portrays, and the contrast between the inside of the circular frame and outside the frame. The flowers (roses) is a nice touch, too.
One thing you could improve on, is to better redefine your lines, and especially the outer lines where drawing meets negative space (the white.) As for the negative space itself, I would recommend you use toned paper in the future. I also would've loved more contrast; more different shades of the same colors. For example, red, crimson and pink. Green, amazon green and army green. What that does is that it brings more life to the drawing.
Overall, very nicely done! Keep it up!
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weewill In reply to Belittled9 [2013-12-08 14:51:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for sharing your thought. Much appreciated!
I intend to follow simple style, and usually work with 3-4 colors in a picture only. But your suggestion is really reasonable, still those colors but with different shades, I'll take note and try to apply that in my future works. Thank you!
Only one thing I don't understand and don't quite agree, can you tell me your opinion why I should use toned paper for the negative space? (since I tried to keep this picture as simple as possible, emphasizing on the black and white)
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Belittled9 In reply to weewill [2013-12-21 09:25:33 +0000 UTC]
What the white does, to me at least, is that it takes away from the focus because it's so incredibly shiny and it screams through my screen. But if you were looking for simplicity, I understand that you'd want to go with B&W. Perhaps you could try the same version with toned paper and see what I mean. You could also go with a transparent background, that could very well be something that goes really well with your designs.
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donyajamshidi [2014-08-27 11:40:32 +0000 UTC]
really good
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Uthopia [2014-08-15 19:44:24 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful! I love the gentle atmosphere.
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Ljoewing [2014-05-17 05:34:20 +0000 UTC]
so great!!
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rocknjade77 [2014-05-13 17:32:12 +0000 UTC]
pretty neat~
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Carolilac [2014-02-23 08:55:32 +0000 UTC]
very beautiful art and love the white hair-so pretty
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Whitelili123 [2014-01-25 23:49:18 +0000 UTC]
This is very beautiful and you did a wonderful job on this as well, I think you'll be a fine artist when you grow up!
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Gryffgirl [2013-12-28 22:28:20 +0000 UTC]
That is beautiful!
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weewill In reply to redsama [2013-11-19 11:53:24 +0000 UTC]
yes, no, whatever : )) nice idea though = ))
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redsama In reply to weewill [2013-11-20 04:43:22 +0000 UTC]
Then why the name? = )))
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weewill In reply to redsama [2013-11-20 05:18:02 +0000 UTC]
thì vẽ ngay khi đi xem concert của Kuricorder về đó, nói chung là cảm xúc thôi : )) diễn ra bằng mồm nghe ngu lắm : )) kiểu music blossoms ấy = ))
nghe cho vui nè >> www.youtube.com/watch?v=f7nf5L…
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redsama In reply to weewill [2013-11-20 05:36:24 +0000 UTC]
Mk, nhạc và tranh vãi cả liên quan = )))))
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weewill In reply to redsama [2013-11-20 05:44:11 +0000 UTC]
cả buổi hòa nhạc cơ mà = ))
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Charlotte-Exotique [2013-11-18 06:39:41 +0000 UTC]
Thia one is really good ! Composition, color, characters' expression, everything ;O;
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NganAnhLe [2013-11-17 13:31:40 +0000 UTC]
beautyful <3
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snowy-wish [2013-11-16 18:25:08 +0000 UTC]
Amazing use of negative space! I love the contrasting colors too!
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localmilk [2013-11-16 02:59:19 +0000 UTC]
Pretty!
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FullMetalPika [2013-11-15 06:50:50 +0000 UTC]
simple but beautiful
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vaunu [2013-11-15 00:56:08 +0000 UTC]
Love this!
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karmelizator [2013-11-14 17:02:08 +0000 UTC]
lovely! so warm c:
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Jyukai-Koudan [2013-11-14 16:36:39 +0000 UTC]
That's beautiful <3
I love the concept.
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