MrMasterplan In reply to Everything2004 [2024-10-22 13:26:35 +0000 UTC]

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MrMasterplan In reply to AbNom [2021-07-30 06:23:24 +0000 UTC]

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MrMasterplan In reply to Moonstone210 [2019-03-26 09:10:29 +0000 UTC]

I did give you one before when I made the suggestion in the first place.

It's where Cameron and his Lucario has their minds altered so that they think they are really each other. (I.E. Cameron thinks he's Lucario and vice versa.)
This in turn causes several awkward moments for the two; such as them freaking out over that 'Lucario' (Cameron) is suddenly wearing clothes and that 'Cameron' (Lucario) is naked.

But, they only THINK that they are each other. Physically, they're still themselves, which Means that they'll also be puzzled as to why 'Lucario' is suddenly unable to use Pokémon moves while 'Cameron' seems to have gained that ability instead.

This would probably work best as a multi-part story. Naturally, you don't have to do all of them in succesion; you can just return to it when you want.

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Moonstone210 In reply to MrMasterplan [2019-03-26 10:50:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm... not very good with multi-part stories....

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MrMasterplan In reply to Moonstone210 [2019-03-26 20:39:32 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmm.....

Okay. Then just make it one part. You don't have to include all of it, just enough to make it funny.

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Moonstone210 In reply to MrMasterplan [2019-03-26 20:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Got it

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MrMasterplan In reply to BoltGreywing [2019-01-26 10:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Yes. Why?

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BoltGreywing In reply to MrMasterplan [2019-01-27 20:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Well I have kind of created a couple of new spyro stories, from a story that I been following.

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MrMasterplan In reply to BoltGreywing [2019-01-28 11:22:41 +0000 UTC]

I see that your remake is of a Spyro story that I like; so I hope you did get the original author's permission to use it.

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BoltGreywing In reply to MrMasterplan [2019-01-29 03:01:32 +0000 UTC]

I have been trying to get his permission to use it for years. Yet each time I send a message I never get response from him. He can read them, but he never responds to it. I think he would have responded to his followers on his profile by now.

I think he is still around or there is some lock on him being able to post words and stuff on da. Either that or he doesn't like his story all that much. I can't say one way or another. I just feel like I need to at least get his story moved on in some state at least.

Its why I am going to continue writing, on it and once I have my website up and running it will be there as well. The other reason I am writing the story is to get better at my own story which has some of its lore based on Bridge Across Worlds + Silverwing.

The next story I am going to work on is the Legend of Crystal a New Beginning. This one I did permission from the author to work on it. It will be based off the old google doc one she has.

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MrMasterplan In reply to BoltGreywing [2019-01-29 07:49:06 +0000 UTC]

Okay then. But I have to ask: in your version of Bridge Across Worlds, could you please end up having Spyro and Cynder go to the human world (if only for a little while) and be transformed into humans while there?
I ask because I'd really like to see how they'd react/get used to their new forms and the new world around them.

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BoltGreywing In reply to MrMasterplan [2019-01-30 05:08:42 +0000 UTC]

I think that sounds like a really interesting idea. It certainly put things into a bit of an interesting spin to things.
It might be a while till I get up to that level.

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MrMasterplan In reply to BoltGreywing [2019-01-30 11:21:29 +0000 UTC]

Take your time. I look forward to seeing how the two dragons will act once they see cars, modern houses, televisions, ect, and the awkwardness of having to get used to two legs, wearing clothes, using utensils to eat with, and so on. I'm sure it'll be very amusing!

On another note; it was a bit difficult for me to figure out which parts of your story were the first, second, third, ect. Could you perhaps insert something in the chapter titles that could help with that?

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BoltGreywing In reply to MrMasterplan [2019-02-17 00:35:05 +0000 UTC]

That is true.

I just added chapter numbers to make things easier to see the progression.

How does it look now?

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MrMasterplan In reply to BoltGreywing [2019-02-17 06:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Much better. Thanks!

Also; is my idea to bring the two dragons temporarily into the human World an idea that you can use? Along with the Associated awkwardness?

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BoltGreywing In reply to MrMasterplan [2019-02-18 01:31:17 +0000 UTC]

I think I might put that in, though it might take some time to get to that point.

I do remember a story of something similiar in one particular dragon story.

In it a dragon that was now a human asked what does being drunk mean?

Said dragon eventually went to the bar to order an ale.

I think the series was called the Dragon and the George.

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MrMasterplan In reply to BoltGreywing [2019-02-18 06:40:33 +0000 UTC]

Just take the time that you need. I look forward to reading it!

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MrMasterplan In reply to Moonstone210 [2018-12-05 11:06:14 +0000 UTC]

You mean that? Anything?

Just so you know, I have no idea how to use the feature concerning paying people to do some commisions.

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Moonstone210 In reply to MrMasterplan [2018-12-05 11:46:21 +0000 UTC]

Yeah!


Well, there are gonna be rules and I am a little hesitant of writing NSFW, but I'll do it for you!

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MrMasterplan In reply to Moonstone210 [2018-12-05 19:49:40 +0000 UTC]

Without any monetary payments?

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Moonstone210 In reply to MrMasterplan [2018-12-05 20:28:49 +0000 UTC]

Nah, trades are for other people/friends, but mainly my friends get to have free requests! ^^

It's a win-win situation in my opinion; you get your story, I get something done for uploading stuff

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MrMasterplan In reply to Moonstone210 [2018-12-06 08:36:18 +0000 UTC]

Alright! I don't have anything that I'd like to have uploaded just yet, but I will inform you when I have something.

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Moonstone210 In reply to MrMasterplan [2018-12-06 11:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Alright then! ^^

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MrMasterplan In reply to tallonran [2011-09-23 06:27:01 +0000 UTC]

Tnx for that. I would really like to know what you think about my story so far.

BTW, your story is AWESOME!

P.S. Once you find some time, try to look at the riddle that I've put up in my journal and see if you can figure it out, please.

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tallonran In reply to MrMasterplan [2011-09-23 15:48:48 +0000 UTC]

the bear is white

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MrMasterplan In reply to tallonran [2011-09-23 16:23:36 +0000 UTC]

Correct!
Wtih my nextt journal entry I will post a joke instead.

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