pondie In reply to lazulitehalcyon [2011-05-12 04:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Still love it, but haven't been keeping up. Kripke said he only had five seasons planned, so anything after this is going to be for ratings only. Also, haven't had anytime with trying to get all my stuff for moving ready. But I do like this!

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pondie In reply to lovelyladylaurel [2010-05-19 05:53:10 +0000 UTC]

there's a contest?

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lovelyladylaurel In reply to pondie [2010-05-26 20:42:45 +0000 UTC]

yeah the picture yourself in wonderland contest on here

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pondie In reply to lovelyladylaurel [2010-05-27 05:54:09 +0000 UTC]

I think I should get a nicer picture if I want to win a contest.

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lovelyladylaurel In reply to pondie [2010-05-27 22:23:13 +0000 UTC]

oh ok

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pondie In reply to lovelyladylaurel [2010-05-28 04:34:31 +0000 UTC]

When is the contest deadline?

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lovelyladylaurel In reply to pondie [2010-05-30 00:18:23 +0000 UTC]

i don't know lol... it may already be past

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pondie In reply to lovelyladylaurel [2010-05-31 03:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Oh well...I'll live.

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pondie In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-04-22 17:10:23 +0000 UTC]

Well personally I want to see more of Alpha and Nix. But I just really enjoy seeing how you write, the places you take the reader, the personas you throw them into.

Maybe more character development, but thats something i have a problem with, so I dont expect it from any one.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to pondie [2010-04-22 23:35:54 +0000 UTC]

What sort of charater devlopment are you looking for?

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pondie In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-04-23 01:13:17 +0000 UTC]

For Alpha and Nix, when did the Master/Slave relationship become something else? Alpha seems to care for Nix, and vice versa, but we don't really see when. What sort of ideas to they have for a future together, if she's going to bear his children?

Ive already given you a comment about the Cole Saga, and for the Demon Saga, more about how Dolores came to be how she is, how she can trust so easily (?) after being abused, and how Derek feels about this new charge.

But please, don't think you have to work on this all at once. I just like to try and help. I'm always good for ideas.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to pondie [2010-04-23 02:48:58 +0000 UTC]

For Alpha and Nyx, it's bested to remember that it's mostly from Nyx's perspective. The relationship will become rather clear in the next two installments, but not more hints for you

As for the Demon Saga, Dolores suffers from stockholm syndrome (wikipedia explanation: [link] ), although it's not immediately obvious because it's from her perspective. But because her father throws her out so quickly her condition doesn't have time to right itself and is transfered to Derek when he finds her. (That being the reasaon she thinks of him as her "Master".) I've been debating whether or not it's entirely necessary to put that in the story or how I would. Your thoughts?

I think I'm very lucky to have a watcher how cares about my work enough to give ideas As my english teacher would say "Your critics are the ones who love you the most. They're the only ones who care enough to try to make you better."

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pondie In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-04-23 05:48:37 +0000 UTC]

i don't want you giving things away. I'll be patient!

Stockholm Syndrome usually has negative connotations. Derek seems like a decent guy, but Dolores is way too trusting and dependent. Is that what you're talking about putting in the story?

And I'm good at creative thinking. I just cant seem to do much for myself other than draw and write lame poetry. And if I had a scanner I could show more of it. Alas, such is not the case.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to pondie [2010-04-23 06:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Dolores' Stockholm Syndrome was caused by her father, not Derek. Once her father throws her out, the only way she knows how to live is by relying on someone else. Maybe I wasn't able to make it clear, but she was raised like a dog most of her life so she exhibits stray puppy behaviors (i.e. following people home, eating food from strangers, letting strangers touch her, etc). Don't worry, she'll grow out of it, but it's kind of necessary at this point to get her to trust a demon. I realize she is too trusting, but that's the character.

Well your photography is very nice Perhaps you can save up for a scanner?

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pondie In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-04-23 18:17:59 +0000 UTC]

saving up, or commandeering the boyfriends. it sounds like a foolproof plan

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to pondie [2010-04-23 23:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Boyfriends?

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pondie In reply to ifyoucanmakeme [2010-04-25 05:31:24 +0000 UTC]

That was supposed to be 'boyfriend-apostrophe-s'. Only got one, and he is pretty much all I can/want to handle.

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ifyoucanmakeme In reply to pondie [2010-04-25 15:03:25 +0000 UTC]

LOL, it's a wee bit hard to handle more

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pondie In reply to chuwenjie [2009-05-04 16:55:04 +0000 UTC]

i want to, but the only means is coloured pencils, and i dont want to mar the hard copy. one of these days though ill be getting illustrator or something, and there will be much colour! but once i get a working scanner there will be colourded works! i have some sitting around

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chuwenjie In reply to pondie [2009-05-04 20:51:47 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok! Can't wait! ^^

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pondie In reply to cs-chan [2008-10-20 17:32:07 +0000 UTC]

im doing well, thanks

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cs-chan In reply to pondie [2008-10-20 17:34:39 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome sweetheart

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pondie In reply to Helleana [2008-07-23 23:20:45 +0000 UTC]

your work is breathtaking, wonderful! I had to be able to see what you come up with next.

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pondie In reply to loverope [2008-07-23 18:22:01 +0000 UTC]

your work is magnificent! im amazed, and your models are so full of life!

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