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Published: 2010-01-16 01:08:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 1204; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 518
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hahaha xD i know , i know .... i drew this ages ago. i just never really got round to .... actually scanning it. cause my scanner got stolen by evil mr. broo. anyway...just something i did during christmas holidays . i have LOADS MORE in that sketchbook of mines ... just really cant be bothered to scanning it. i promise thought that i will get art requests and trades scanned within the next week or so. sorry guys super busy at school and that application for the oxbrige thinnngy. xD lifes hectic.
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Critique time!
Since this is the first time I do a critique I feel a bit insecure...oh well.
This is an awesome piece.I feel that you put effort in it,and the details give a special effect,since they are well done and made in a large amounts but are not messy,passing an impression of organization.I also admire your shading on the dress-it's done on the right place,and you can see the light source prefectly.Also gives a flow and volume to the dress.
On the other hand,you failed at anatomy.The neck is too large and the shoulders are too short.Same with arms and the hands,even though well-made,are also too small.About the face,the right side of hair,unlike the left one,doesn't have any flow,which makes the hair look a bit strange.The eyes are sweet,but the angle of the left one is wrong.I would reccomend you to read once a tutorial about 3/4 view face.It helps a lote.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
Also her expression is a bit blank.but that's easy to fix<3
Oh,also you shouldn't leave all these blank space.It looks too strange with all the other details.
For the end,I admire you.You can be an young artist but you already make an awesome work.Congrats,little sis!e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c… " width="20" height="20" alt="
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thankies gwen. much appretiated i still need to practise alot. i shall get right on it!
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<3 you're welcome<3333
yeah,but you will be awesome,I know!^^
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Oh wow the amount of detail is really..... woah o_o~♥
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really nice work, I like especially this decoration around her, it's made truly great
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ehehe. yeah it took a while but i manage to hang in there gosh. i hate my lazynesss xD
thankies for the nice comment
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yeah ^^ so good
it's hellobaby style, isn't it?
you are welcome, cute friend
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yeah. lol oops. i was a little inspired but i feel a little bad now ^^'
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mhm ^^
don't feel bad, you are learning from skilled artist in fact ;]
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its lovely, I wish I could see it in real life. However I agree with gwedolyn, dont forget that girls have shoulders too! great one! Its hard to pull off that hello-baby look, but you did it pretty well!
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ehehehehehe. im sorry ^^' i fail at anatomy .... im still practising so one day i will get it... haha hopefully.
anyway thank you for the nice comment u really think ive pulled it off?
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Remember I said I'd critique your qork when I got a sub?Well,mission completed!>D
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OMG THANKIES GWEn . hahaha i always fail at anatomy xD
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<3 you're welcome!Hope my crit is good enough..never done it before,lol
I know,me too
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no it was good. haha xD yup i need to work on alot of things and i thank you for doing this it really helps me alot.
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haha thank you<3 I did my best,lolXD
yeah,same here<3 i need to improve much tooXD
aww you're welcome*bows*
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THANKIES <333
and thanks for putting it to ur collection <333
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