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bdehkte β€” It's not real

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Description i can hear it. it's just down the hall, it's shadow reaching up to where i'm sitting
i can't run, i can't hide
it's going to find me
a low grinding groan tells me its moving down the hall towards me
"it's not real." i whisper to myself. "it's not real."
tears of fear swell in my eyes as the grinding groan gets closer.
i'm frozen with fear, my brain is telling me to run but i can't find the strength
my heart is pounding so loud i feel it might burst through my chest
"it's not real." i whispered again, tears streaming heavily mixing with blood on my face
a black clawed hand reaches around the corner
the grinding groan goes silent
it's right there
its so close
"it's not real."Β 
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Comments: 45

Priyakli [2016-09-22 01:44:57 +0000 UTC]

That thing is going to give me nightmares
Anyway, I just love the layout of the picture, and the color scheme... it all comes together in the perfect amount of creepy. Great work!

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bdehkte In reply to Priyakli [2016-09-22 14:24:13 +0000 UTC]

it pretty freaking creepy......
thanks

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TheFestiveMountain [2016-09-21 12:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Tbh always when i die in dreams,i wake up.

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bdehkte In reply to TheFestiveMountain [2016-09-21 15:51:34 +0000 UTC]

i've never died in my dreams. worst case was i just got hurt so bad but couldn't die.....it was awful

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TheFestiveMountain In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 15:54:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh...
i sometimes fall of a cliff or something in my dreams,and in that moment i die.

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bdehkte In reply to TheFestiveMountain [2016-09-21 15:59:26 +0000 UTC]

i've had those but i always wake up before i hit. and when i wake up i'm on the floor

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TheFestiveMountain In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 16:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Ye,that sometimes happens to me too

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bdehkte In reply to TheFestiveMountain [2016-09-21 16:07:37 +0000 UTC]

it sucks...i broke my toe doing that once

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picnokinesis [2016-09-21 09:15:34 +0000 UTC]

This is so creepy and awesome! xD The expressions and colours and atmosphere and everything are perfect. Seriously, that puppet thing is terrifying.
It actually kinda reminds me of a creepy Avengers fanfic/fancomic I almost did a while ago where there's this creature called The Beast following Clint around but only he can see it and everyone thinks he's crazy but it's completely and utterly real and damn freaky

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 15:50:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks
that sounds awesome! i would so read that!Β 

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 16:03:14 +0000 UTC]

I actually have an extract or two of it written (they're short and really old though...) so if you want I can put them in my sta.sh and send you the link? Only if you want though xD

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 16:07:22 +0000 UTC]

yes i want it!Β 

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 16:10:58 +0000 UTC]

haha, ok let me sort it out! xD

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 16:13:31 +0000 UTC]

yay! i'm excited!Β 

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 16:29:12 +0000 UTC]

sta.sh/2al0dp4jif1?edit=1 I wrote some stuff in the description to try and explain what's going on/what happens (roughly) in the fic. Oh, and I added 'untitled' in there which is an unrelated extra one that I found whilst looking on that memory stick xD

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 16:33:58 +0000 UTC]

holy crap that was the best thing i have ever read.Β 

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 16:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Are you serious? xD

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 16:36:39 +0000 UTC]

very serious. i just may draw something for this

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 16:40:40 +0000 UTC]

ARE YOU SERIOUS no way AAH ok ok do you want a proper description of The Beast? I have one somewhere....

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 16:41:45 +0000 UTC]

lol yep very serious. yeah that would be a good idea

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 16:51:54 +0000 UTC]

oh man aaah! xDΒ 
Sorry, I had to run up and get notebooks (it's so old I wrote a lot of it by hand xD). So, I wrote this thing out as a comic script so the description is kinda all over the place, and I've had to write out the whole sentence otherwise the tense doesn't make sense, but:
1st panel - side view - Clint looking into the forest (away from camera). He's seen something that's spooked him. We can see a dark monstrous shape with glowing eyes...

And then also:

1st panel - BIG - The agent has been grabbed by the Beast, which holds him above the ground. The Beast is completely black and should look as scary as possible, almost dripping with darkness. It has teeth...lots of teeth - and claws. It's vaguely wolf-like inΒ appearance, but I figure it could probably morph into whatever form it wanted.Β 

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 16:53:06 +0000 UTC]

oooh nice

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 16:58:34 +0000 UTC]

Also (I'm reading this old comic script now) it seems to be able to disintegrate? It can also speak, although I think it's actually telepathic and only Clint/altered persons can hear it. It also likes stabbing people with it's claws, it seems.Β 
I might write out some of the comic script for you, if you want more to read? Maybe, it might take a little while.

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 16:59:49 +0000 UTC]

sweet. yeah that'd be good. and that's okay i have requests that i've been meaning to do for months so i gotta do those first

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 17:01:38 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, cool thing. I will see what I can do. I might write it more in prose, it seems to lend itself to that. Depends on things.

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 17:03:42 +0000 UTC]

okay just let me knowΒ 

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 19:08:01 +0000 UTC]

I found some more extractsΒ sta.sh/2al0dp4jif1?edit=1

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bdehkte In reply to picnokinesis [2016-09-21 19:13:06 +0000 UTC]

oooooo! i like!Β 

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picnokinesis In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 17:04:11 +0000 UTC]

sure thing

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little-pencial [2016-09-20 23:20:21 +0000 UTC]

*shakes blue scout* wake up your dreaming

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bdehkte In reply to little-pencial [2016-09-21 00:47:31 +0000 UTC]

if only he was O_o

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little-pencial In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 02:47:35 +0000 UTC]

*shakes harder* it's a dream please wake up D:

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bdehkte In reply to little-pencial [2016-09-21 02:52:17 +0000 UTC]

i don't think he's going to...D: he's in too deep

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little-pencial In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-21 13:29:46 +0000 UTC]

*pours ice cold water* wake up you jerk!

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bdehkte In reply to little-pencial [2016-09-21 15:46:52 +0000 UTC]

it's not working! AUGH

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little-pencial In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-22 00:04:39 +0000 UTC]

*pinches* wake up you big jerk!! *shakes*

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bdehkte In reply to little-pencial [2016-09-22 01:12:58 +0000 UTC]

nothing is HAPPENING!!!Β 

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little-pencial In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-22 02:51:33 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAAAAHH

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bdehkte In reply to little-pencial [2016-09-22 14:25:47 +0000 UTC]

AUGH!

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little-pencial In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-22 22:38:10 +0000 UTC]

can anything wake him up?

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bdehkte In reply to little-pencial [2016-09-23 03:55:25 +0000 UTC]

with that puppet thing after him? probably not......

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little-pencial In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-23 13:25:13 +0000 UTC]

.....crap

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bdehkte In reply to little-pencial [2016-09-23 19:15:50 +0000 UTC]

yep. he's screwed

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little-pencial In reply to bdehkte [2016-09-23 23:28:42 +0000 UTC]

D:

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bdehkte In reply to little-pencial [2016-09-24 02:49:12 +0000 UTC]

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