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pcm-man [2024-07-13 20:37:04 +0000 UTC]
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ChrisDell [2021-06-04 08:30:50 +0000 UTC]
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Aboneart [2020-12-04 03:25:23 +0000 UTC]
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MartinSpez [2020-11-07 16:41:21 +0000 UTC]
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aliasMV [2020-09-28 20:54:43 +0000 UTC]
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reckonwith69 [2020-04-09 23:40:33 +0000 UTC]
I just realized a flaw in your design.Β The vocal chords are in the windpipe, not the esophagus.Β So if the mouth tube is touching the vocal chords, food would be going into the lungs, not the stomach.
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reckonwith69 [2020-04-09 15:05:09 +0000 UTC]
He may have spared her from a life of permanent bondage, but starvation is a prolonged, agonizing way to die.Β The starvation plug was only intended as a deterrent to him trying to free her.Β If he wanted to put her out of her misery, he should have used a quicker, more painless method, like poison.
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CelestialSecrets In reply to reckonwith69 [2020-04-09 15:09:25 +0000 UTC]
Yep, he's definitely a psychopath, whether our FMC wants to see him that way or not π
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tomtpv49 [2020-03-24 03:59:24 +0000 UTC]
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CelestialSecrets In reply to tomtpv49 [2020-03-24 17:56:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! π and wow, I've never heard of that company before o:
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reckonwith69 In reply to CelestialSecrets [2020-04-09 06:35:46 +0000 UTC]
I remember seeing a reality show with, I think, Paris Hilton, where she got this "permanent" friendship bracelet, the idea being that it was secured with a very small screw that most people were not likely to be able to remove, therefore you had to go back to the jeweler to remove it.Β She did, and the jeweler had a lot of trouble getting it off.
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KurvyKate [2019-12-07 21:14:15 +0000 UTC]
This is horrible. Β It's probably the best horror story I've ever read. Β I've been poking about in your gallery and your faves for several hours now because I haven't met you before and I've been fascinated. Β I'm pleased I read this last!
Did I write a comment somewhere here about being disappointed by trying to bring fantasies to life? Β I certainly wrote one about self bondage but Β that was when I thought you were quite sweet. Β I feel like I've met monsters now. Β You've affected me, I feel like I'm scared of you.
It's an awesome piece of writing, so powerful I almost regret reading it.
Fuck!
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KurvyKate In reply to CelestialSecrets [2019-12-09 09:04:55 +0000 UTC]
When you write something you can never be sure that your reader's preconceptions, understanding of your language or personal depravity will allow your intentions to remain intact. Β
Permanent bondage must be the ultimate cerebral thrill but not because we want it, because we want to be scared of it. Β How profound, how overwhelming and how destructive it must be to know that it's possible. Β That must be dread like nothing else, an erotic fear unequalled. Β As soon as you glued her teeth I was horrified because my wickedness thrives on threat and I knew regret was inevitable. Β You chose days, I think hours.
Our loved ones don't know how driven we are, they don't understand dread like we do and Kyle's love make him an easy accomplice in disaster.
I thought "Oh god no!" worse, line by line. Β If you'd wanted a cautionary tale it didn't have to go this far, you wanted horror didn't you?
Thoughts released are real. Β As soon as you tell someone it's out there, in the ether, the universe knows. Β I couldn't sleep last night with a head full of feeding tubes, welded body cases and agony with only one escape. Β How ever must it have felt to starve to death with her beautiful fantasy in ruins? Β
I'll tell you again, this is awful, magnificently, evocatively, heart breakingly miserable. Β I feel like I've been touched, brilliant!
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CelestialSecrets In reply to KurvyKate [2019-12-10 02:56:55 +0000 UTC]
Words like these are honestly the best any writer can ask to hear. I am so glad it touched you and made you think deeply about it!
Yes, my fascination with permanent bondage is definitely about the dread or anticipation of it. I am level-headed enough to know I would definitely never, ever, EVER want it for "actually seriously real". But I like to push limits and imagine the most extreme of the extreme, and yes, something about knowing it is possible is delectably horrifying.
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DjEtla [2019-08-06 17:38:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow, interesting story.
Mechanically it's much more complex than any bondage story I think I've encountered before. These characters put a lot of thought into what they're doing.
Emotionally it's also far more complex than I expected it to be, with a powerful story arc from great joy to the depths of despair. It's an interesting way to tell the story -- sacrificing the most erotic elements in order to take the story in a different direction.
I've thought about writing a story of a couple who choose for the woman to be put in a permanent bondage scenario. (Similar to your story, I think it will be a mutual decision for between the man and woman, with the wife pushing the idea the strongest.) Maybe your story has given me a few ideas, or at least some inspiration for go ahead and write the story I have in mind.
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MartinSpez [2019-04-24 08:46:17 +0000 UTC]
I like the idea of a free willing woman to be put in permanent bondage - but this seems to be not very realistic. For my part IΒ΄d left her vision to be able to make contact through the eyes...
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BakersDozen101 [2018-08-30 13:27:21 +0000 UTC]
Best compliment I can give: fresh. It's a slice of bondage life that's new and the newness shows. Thanks for your imagination.
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aqc [2018-08-05 07:48:55 +0000 UTC]
Kyle are idiot. With self own hands turn his beloved into a wooden trunk. Without rollback possibility.
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CelestialSecrets In reply to aqc [2018-08-05 21:13:21 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha, I would agree x)
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tanaraq [2018-07-21 13:22:59 +0000 UTC]
AMAZING
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drvladmir [2018-07-01 16:05:22 +0000 UTC]
Interesting how you're avle to encapsulate what seem to be an allegory for taking one's passion to earnestly In a very erotic manner, well, it's my impressions atleast.
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Amber84 In reply to CelestialSecrets [2018-06-10 21:41:44 +0000 UTC]
i'm actually looking for someone to make me a slave forever
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Amber84 In reply to CelestialSecrets [2018-06-10 21:43:45 +0000 UTC]
maybe one day someone will write a story about me..
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gooeyness [2018-05-10 21:43:29 +0000 UTC]
seems to me with an angle grinder he could have her free in a day or so
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