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craigcermak — Batman Vs. Predator p2 Pencils

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Description Page 2 pencils for Narrative class. I'm looking forward to inking these more than I did penciling. I'm going to try out some different textures and layering techniques that I haven't before, so hopefully it'll turn out alright.

Edit: COMPLETELY forgot to mention this, but the fourth panel is from the Predator's POV, in his thermal vision, which is why it's just line-work. I'm sure someone out there just thought I lost my mind.
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Comments: 15

houseofmystery [2010-02-12 01:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Email me. Then I'll tell you how bloody awesome this image it.

...oh, balls.

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powblamshazam [2010-02-09 05:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Great composition. You might not like it completely, but it shows you've got the chops.

Also, I'm glad you're experimenting with panel design. Simple squares and rectangles can only go so far.

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craigcermak In reply to powblamshazam [2010-02-09 14:52:38 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, funny thing is, I always experimented with different panel shapes and designs, until this school year. My narrative teacher said he preferred just rectangle shapes and felt anything else, including breaking panel borders, distracted from the narrative of the page. Of course, I wanted to do what he preferred (and it's always good to try out every way to do something, even if it appears to be more simple or not) so now I'm slowly transitioning what I've learned from that and mixing it with what worked before.

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DelHewittJr [2010-02-09 01:08:51 +0000 UTC]

great stuff whats your turn around time? How long does it take you to do a page and what school are you attending?

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craigcermak In reply to DelHewittJr [2010-02-09 14:54:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm attending the Joe Kubert School in NJ, and it takes me a good 8 hours or so, all things depending, to pencil a narrative page. Inking varies greatly, sometimes 4 hours, sometimes 8 again. Other things are scattered too. Glad you like the page!

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DelHewittJr In reply to craigcermak [2010-02-09 23:38:46 +0000 UTC]

keep it up! Great work.

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Arcalian [2010-02-08 21:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Psychological warfare.

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craigcermak In reply to Arcalian [2010-02-09 14:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Followed by a good ol' fashioned ass beating.

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NamiUzumaki [2010-02-08 21:29:43 +0000 UTC]

HOLY snap. D: That's so hella epic cool? Is this going to be more than your usual two page assignments?

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craigcermak In reply to NamiUzumaki [2010-02-09 14:55:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Do you mean is there going to be more pages than just these two? Sadly, nope, that's it for this assignment, though we do have to ink it next. I was hoping to do a fight scene.... ah well

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NamiUzumaki In reply to craigcermak [2010-02-09 21:15:51 +0000 UTC]

D: Aw man. I was looking forward to a cool fight scene. Oh well...

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MarDun [2010-02-08 21:04:00 +0000 UTC]

Simply amazing

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craigcermak In reply to MarDun [2010-02-09 14:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Club-Batman [2010-02-08 20:45:03 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic!

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craigcermak In reply to Club-Batman [2010-02-09 14:55:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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