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CuteCat213 — If I'm Gone
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Published: 2015-05-07 18:36:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 212; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Would you miss me if I'm gone?
Would you cry or say 'so long'?
Would you be sad if I disappeared?
Hold me close and beg me to stay here?
Would I be worth the price you paid?
A precious memory or one you let fade?
Would you want me if I weren't there?
To cry with me and run your fingers through my hair?
Would you stand by me, right or wrong?
Would you miss me if I'm gone?
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Comments: 3

DragonIcefire [2016-08-09 15:55:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow... I just read both parts to this and it is really incredible. The way both parts are written and complement each other is brilliant, it invokes real emotion and thought as you read it. Very well done, I love it <3

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CuteCat213 In reply to DragonIcefire [2016-08-09 16:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Gaaahhh! *blushy* Thank you. I'm kind of prolific with the depressing poetry thing. *bows* I'm glad you liked it~!

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DragonIcefire In reply to CuteCat213 [2016-08-10 06:39:44 +0000 UTC]

Very well deserved You're very good at it as well, I can't wait to see more of your work!

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