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SimplyAMadHatter [2010-01-05 21:50:08 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
First thing i have to say: love the colours. It's my favourite pallete; reds, yellows, browns, ochres.... Very fitted for the steampunk because of the copper, leather and all the other elements that are involved.
vision
I like it. It's very dinamic and attractive to the eye. The long and thin canvas gives it a sense of height and emphasises the distance that exists between the action and the zeppelin flying in the sky. The arrangement of clouds also add to the depth of the image. A very effective arrangement of characters as well, though i think that maybe a little more detail in the background (a couple of buildings or trees) would make it just perfect [this is just my opinion, guys!]
originality
i cant rate it 5/5 because what may be original to me might not be for someone else! There are so many approaches to a theme that all could be considered original. I really like the idea, though. Two very similar yet different styles meeting together... oh, how many ideas can you get for that e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
Technique
More, you know i love your colouring and shading techniques, honey. They're exquisite. There only thing i would suggest is maybe more defined shadows. They are too subtle on some parts and i think that more contrast would certainly add impact to the piece.
Impact
As said before, i think more contrast would be good. Darker shadows, brighter light.... it'd do wonders. Maybe even try to play with different lights; it looks like sunset, so why not try orangey-brown lights and shadows?
Just remember, dont be afraid to have a play around iwth colours e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" /> you've got amazing skills, and with my lineart im sure you can do wonderfull pieces (and yes, this might be me suggesting another collab piece e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Wink/Razz" />)
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HisuiOgawa [2010-05-30 09:06:51 +0000 UTC]
Waw cool 8D
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OtoGirl [2010-03-29 01:55:28 +0000 UTC]
this is beautiful and reminds ,e of Hollow Fields!
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dark-elen In reply to OtoGirl [2010-04-08 13:19:36 +0000 UTC]
Thank you :3
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elfvale [2010-01-13 02:52:27 +0000 UTC]
Very nice it is cool. I like steam punk i did mine in a steam but no punk. But I like yours real well.
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elfvale In reply to dark-elen [2010-01-24 02:19:08 +0000 UTC]
I think it is what they think the world would be like had it not progressed past steam machines. Cool huh
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dark-elen In reply to elfvale [2010-01-26 23:47:46 +0000 UTC]
Haha, cool! ^^ And the punk I guess is because it is cool like that. xD
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elfvale In reply to dark-elen [2010-01-27 17:28:56 +0000 UTC]
Yes very much so. I think steam punk is a very cool consept.
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dark-elen In reply to elfvale [2010-01-31 20:43:09 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to go steampunk one day. :3 Sadly I dont have the money or time to do all those little details. xD
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elfvale In reply to dark-elen [2010-01-31 20:46:54 +0000 UTC]
Yeah it is very cool.
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MississippiMudPie [2010-01-12 19:42:20 +0000 UTC]
wow, me gusta muchísimo!
especially the poses, the colours and of course: the clothing!
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The-Mad-Pirate [2010-01-06 01:01:34 +0000 UTC]
Very nice work ......
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The-Mad-Pirate In reply to dark-elen [2010-01-14 16:44:55 +0000 UTC]
de nada niña , hiciste un muy buen trabajo.
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llama-doll [2010-01-04 20:36:02 +0000 UTC]
God this is stunning. Your artworks are always so beautiful <333
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iHootie [2009-12-31 18:19:23 +0000 UTC]
Ha, this is great.
Amazing job.
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Aii-luv In reply to dark-elen [2010-01-01 02:45:06 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, no problem, you totally deserved it!
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incandescent-lights [2009-12-31 04:40:46 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, I love the way it turned out.
The girl's expression makes me giggle for some reason. xD
Good luck.~
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incandescent-lights In reply to dark-elen [2009-12-31 05:29:17 +0000 UTC]
She seems to have been dressed for the wrong occasion. xD
Welcomes. ;3
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